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Question

各位老师下午好，非常荣幸能接受您们的面试，我的名字是牛，来自吉林某高中，在高中阶段曾获省物理竞赛二等奖，因为我的父母都从事电力工作，所以我的理想是在高中毕业后来贵校求学，在以后的工作中为中国电力行业做出贡献.
句子连贯一点...稍微口语化一点...拜谢！

Answer 1

Good afternnon everyone,it's a great honor to be here.I'm really excited about the interview today. My name is Niu and I'm from a high school in Ji Lin. I won the second place in a physics competition in the whole province last year. Both of my parents are working for the electricity company. It's my dream to attend your school after graduation. I really want to make my own contribution to China's electric occupation.Thank you so much.

Answer 2

Good afternoon! I'm very pleased to accept your interview here. My name is Niu, I'm studying at one high school in Jilin, and I have won the second prize of Province Physics Competion. Both of my parents are employed in the electrical , so, I hope to study here after graduation, and contribute to china electrical, thank you very much!

Answer 3

Good afternoon to all the teachers, it’s my great honore to have this opportunity for the interview. My name if Niu, and i graduated from one high school in Ji Lin. When I was a high school student, I won the second prize of a Province Physics Competion. I come here after my gradutation because both of my parents are working for the electric utility, and I really hope that I can make a contribution for the China Electric Utility.
Thank you!