谁能帮我翻译一下？

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这是我毕业论文的内容，可我不会翻译，在线翻译又不行。哪位同学能帮我把下面这从段话翻译成英文吗？我急用。谢谢

内容摘要：青少年时期是一个人一生的重要转折期，随着网络化进程的推进，越来越多的青少年出现了网络成瘾。而目前尤以网络游戏在青少年中最为普及。本文揭示了在网络游戏中的青少年团体的形成和表现方式，探究团体的目的和青少年在其中的角色分类。通过探索青少年在网络游戏中的成长任务，分析网络游戏对青少年成长的影响，以期公平公正地看待青少年与网络游戏这一新生事物之间的关系。希望通过正确社会舆论的引导，建立在网络游戏中以自我为导向的学习体验，帮助青少年建立自我意识、完善个性发展，同时加大来自学校和家庭的社会支持力度。

关键词：网络游戏 青少年 成长

后面是在线翻译的。帮我看看要改哪些。

Abstract: The young people time is a person life the importanttransition time, along with the network advancement advancement, moreand more many young people appeared the network to become addicted to.But at present is especially most popular by the network game in theyoung people. This article has promulgated in the network game youngpeople association's formation and the performance way, inquires intothe association the goal and the young people in the among roleclassification. Through explores young people's in network game growthduty, the analysis network game the influence which grows to the youngpeople, fairly fairly regards the young people and the network by thetime plays between this newly emerging things relations. The hopethrough the correct public opinion guidance, establishes in thenetwork game take self- as the guidance study experience, helps the young people to establish the self-awareness, the perfectindividuality development, simultaneously enlarges supports dynamicsfrom the school and the family society.

Key word: Network game, young people, growth

Answer 1

摘要: 青年人时间是人生活importanttransition 时间, 与网络推进推进, 更多许多青年人看上去网络成为上瘾的to.But 当前是特别最普遍由网络比赛在theyoung 人的moreand 一起。这篇文章公布了在网络游戏youngpeople association's 形成并且表现方式, 询问intothe 协会目标和青年人在在roleclassification 之中。通过探索年轻people's 在网络游戏growthduty, 影响成长为youngpeople, 相当相当看待青年人和网络由thetime 戏剧在这之间最近涌现的事联系的分析网络比赛。hopethrough 正确民意教导, 建立在thenetwork 游戏作为自已当教导研究经验, 帮助青年人建立自我意识, perfectindividuality 发展, 同时扩大支持dynamicsfrom 学校和家庭社会。 关键词: 网络游戏, 青年人, 成长
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Answer 2

Abstract: The teenager time is a great turn point of one’s life, with the development of the network, more and more teenagers have the addict to the network, especially to the network play. This study disputes the form of the teenager team and the performance means. Meanwhile it explores the team aim and the sort of the roles they take
part in. To analyze what the influence does the network work on the growing of the teenagers through exploring the grown task they do on the network so as to view the relationship between the emerging thing and the teenagers equally. Due to the lead of the positive public voice, we have to establish the studying study experience and take themselves as the guides in the network play, to help them set up the self-awareness and complete the development of the personality. Meanwhile, we also need to increase the social supply of the families and schools.
Key words: network play, teenagers, grow

Answer 3

重新写了一遍。英语专业的作品，参考吧。

Abstract: The teenager stage is an important turning point of one's life. With the development of internet, more and more young people become addicted to network. At present, online game is the most prevalent among teenagers. This article revealed the formation and behavior of teenager group related to the online game, in order to analyze the purpose of this group and the role played by the teenager group in the game. Through exploring young people's growth tasks in online game, analyzing the influence of online game upon teenagers, we would like to look into the relationship between teenagers and online game equally and fairly. Besides, we also hope that through the correct public opinion guidance, we can establish self-oriented study experience of young people in the online game, help young people to establish self-awareness, improve development of personality, and in the meantime enlarge supports from the school, family and the society.

Key word: online game, young people, growth

Answer 4

Content summary: Teenagers period is important turn one of all one's life of a person, with the promotion of the networked process, more and more teenagers have presented network into the addiction. And popularize among teenagers most with the network game particularly at present. This text has announced the forming of the group of teenagers in the network game and behavior way, probe into purpose and teenagers of the group in the classification of role among them. Through exploring the growth tasks of teenagers in the network game, analyze the influence that the network game grows up to teenagers, expect to be fair to treat the relation between this new things of teenagers and network game justly. Hope to set up the study taking oneself as the direction in the network game to experience through the guide of the correct public opinion, help teenagers to set up ego consciousness, improve the individual character to develop, devote more efforts to supporting from school and the society of the family at the same time.

Answer 5

Abstract: The teenager stage is an important turning point of one's life. With the development of internet, more and more young people become addicted to network. At present, online game is the most prevalent among teenagers. This article revealed the formation and behavior of teenager group related to the online game, in order to analyze the purpose of this group and the role played by the teenager group in the game. Through exploring young people's growth tasks in online game, analyzing the influence of online game upon teenagers, we would like to look into the relationship between teenagers and online game equally and fairly. Besides, we also hope that through the correct public opinion guidance, we can establish self-oriented study experience of young people in the online game, help young people to establish self-awareness, improve development of personality, and in the meantime enlarge supports from the school, family and the society.