谁能帮我检查一下这篇英语作文的错误？

Question

这是直接在google翻译的。。。(1) the mother was ill, lie on the bed, I sat in the mother's bedside computers.

(2) mother most of the time is quietly lying in bed, but sometimes she would tempt consider talking to me. Said she was felt which place not feeling too well, say again she had a terrible dream, say her young from time to tome how healthy, one is able to do many live. Then I always very impatient.

(3) once, mother suddenly crouched over come closer to computer said: "you always do on your computer? Don't you feel tired?"

4 "chat." I impatiently say.

[" chat? And who talk?" Mother asked again.

[6] "a field of, don't know."

[7] "incognizant?" Mother seemed very puzzled, "that is said what ah?"

Stuff "anyway also boring, literally say what also do the same."

⑼ "oh." Mother cryptically watched, and as a tired though long give a sigh, to lie to go back to bed.

⑽ again I chatted, inadvertently old look at her mother, she is the zheng fix attention on staring at the ceiling with rapture. My heart suddenly move. My name is here with mother, but can do for her some rice pour water outside, also do?

My mother is born when mercenary dropped the trouble, for many years has been praised by illnesses, this year is added in the many this elderly patient. Maybe because mother longyear sick, she care, we also become accustomed, sometimes home on the weekends and seldom think to be active and help her do something, always her every ground stem this dry it.

⑿ mother the sick, is tired disease. She was ill, not only get our sympathy, but who saw she would complain, think she tire yourself ill, harm we also follow involvement. Whenever we complain mother always didn't say anything, as if she really like doing something wrong.

[13] I turn off the computer, give mother cup of water. Without waiting for what I said, the mother said: "see computer tired eyes? Quick lie down with his eyes closed and rest a while."

14 I promise, pull a quilt lay in the mother's side. I said, "mom, you tell me what you had before, let me see if I can write articles."

⒂ mother surprise to temporarily don't know what to say. I lay silent and waited patiently for she said.

Displayed suddenly felt that the original lying in mother's side, is such feeling warm.

⒄ but I have forgotten for many years问题补充：

中文原文 http://tieba.baidu.com/f?kz=288250267

Answer 1

母亲病了，躺在床上，我就坐在母亲的床边玩电脑。
有时母亲睡着了，但更多的时候她醒着。他醒着，除了起床到阳台上稍微活动一下外，就好睁着眼躺在床上。母亲大多数时候是悄无声息地躺在床上的，但有时候她也会试探着想跟我说话，说她有觉得哪个地方不太舒服了，说她又做了一个可怕的梦了，说她年轻时有多么健康，一个人能干多少活了。这时我总是很不耐烦，眼睛半寸也不离开屏幕地说：“你想点你别的事行不行？怎么总想自己的病？”每当这时，母亲就不再说话，但过一会儿，她又开始不自觉地说了。于是，又会惹出我的一顿埋怨。
有一次，母亲突然探过身来凑近电脑说：“你一直在电脑上干什么？不累吗？”
“聊天。”我不耐烦地说。
“聊天？跟谁聊啊？”母亲又问。
“一个外地的，不认识。”
“不认识？”母亲好像很是不解，“那说什么呀？”
“反正也无聊，随便说什么也行。”我说。
“哦。”母亲若有所思地看了一会儿，又像很累似的长叹一口气，重新躺回到床上。
我又聊了一会儿，无意中转头看看母亲，她正睁着眼看着天花板出神。
我心里突然一动。
我名义上是在这里陪伴母亲，可除了能为她做点饭倒杯水外，还做了什么？
母亲是生我的时候落下的病根，多年来一直备受疾病的折磨，近年又添上了许多老年病，也许因为母亲常年生病，她自己不在乎了，我们也习以为常了，有时周末回家，也很少想着主动帮她干点什么，总是她一个人里里外外地干这干那。母亲这次犯病，就是因为拆洗了过冬的棉衣，又刨了楼后的一块空地才累病的。她病了，不但得不到我们的同情，反而谁见了她都会抱怨，都觉得她把自己累病了，害得我们也跟着受累。每当我们抱怨的时候，母亲总是一声不吭，仿佛她真的做错了什么一样。可是，她做错了什么？
我关掉电脑，给母亲倒上一杯水。还没等我说什么，母亲却说：“看电脑累眼睛吧，快躺下闭着眼歇一歇。”
我答应着，拉了一床被子就躺在母亲身边，母亲却又把她的一件羽绒服往我的被子上压，说：“暖气停了，盖一床被子睡着了会冷。”
我说：“我不睡。妈，你给我说说你以前的事，我看看能不能写篇文章。”
母亲惊喜得一时不知该说什么。我静静地躺着，耐心地等着她说。
突然觉得，原来躺在母亲身边，就是这样的感觉啊--------暖暖的。

（摘自《读者》）

Answer 2

Mother was ill in bed, I sat on her bed playing computer.
Sometimes the mother fell asleep, but more often she was awake. His waking hours, in addition to activities to get up a little bit to the outside on the balcony, like the eyes open in bed. Most of the time the mother was lying quietly in bed, but sometimes she will want to talk to me tentatively, that which she had felt uncomfortable place, and said she had a terrible dream, and said how healthy she was young, how much work a person capable of. At this time I'm always impatient, his eyes never leave the screen half an inch, said: "Do you want to point something else you all right? How ill always want to own?" Whenever this time, the mother no longer speak, but After a while,
She began unconsciously to say. So, will stir up my meal complain.
On one occasion, the mother suddenly leaned leaned computer said: "You've been doing on the computer? Not you tired?"
"Chat." I said impatiently.
"Chat? Whom talk ah?" The mother asked.
"A field, and do not know."
"Do not know?" Mother seems very puzzled, "what did it say?"
"Anyway, are boring and say nothing line." I said.
"Oh." His mother looked for a moment thoughtfully, like a tired like heavy sigh, lay back in bed again.
I chatted for a while, accidentally turned around to see his mother, who was wide open seeing the ceiling lost in thought.
Suddenly I thought of a move.
My name is here with her mother, can do something in addition to rice for her a glass of water, but also do?
When the mother is angry with me down the root cause, over the years has always been of illnesses in recent years have added a lot of elderly patients on, perhaps because the mother perennial illness, she does not care, we have become accustomed to, and sometimes weekends home, also do something to help her think less active, always a man inside and out to her do this or that. The mother fall ill, it is because apart and wash the winter coat, but also planing a piece of land after the building was Leibing's. She was sick, instead of getting our sympathy, but who met her would complain, feel she gave her Leibing, which led to our involvement also followed. When we complain,
Mother always silent, as if she really did something wrong, like. However, she did something wrong?
I turned off the computer for my mother a cup of water. Before I say anything, his mother said: "look at the computer tired your eyes, take a break soon lie down and eyes closed."
I agreed with, pull on the bed quilt to lie beside my mother, but her mother, a down jacket into my quilt on the pressure, saying: "Heating stopped, cover a quilt to sleep will be cold."
I said: "I do not sleep. Mom, you gave me about your past, and I see if I can write articles."
Mother surprise was wondering what to say. I lay still, patiently waiting for her to say.
I suddenly felt the original lying mother, is such a warm feeling ah ------warm。

Answer 3

Mother was ill, lie on the bed, I sat in the mother's bedside computers.
Sometimes mother fell asleep, but most of the time she awake. He is awake, in addition to get up to the balcony outside move slightly, good zheng fix attention on lying in bed. Mother most of the time is quietly lying in bed, but sometimes she would tempt consider talking to me, said she had felt which place not feeling too well, say again she had a terrible dream, say her young from time to tome how healthy, one is able to do many live. Then I always very impatient eyes half inches won't leave the screen to say: "you want something you something else do? How total want to own disease?" Whenever at this time, the mother would not speak, but after a while, she began to unconsciously said.

Answer 4

没错

Answer 5

开头没大写