帮我做下MBA面试自我介绍的英文翻译吧,明天就要用,谢谢高手了,翻译要准!

Question

各位老师下午好，我很高兴能参加这次面试。我从山西来，我今年25岁，我毕业于北京化工大学，我的专业是电子科学与技术。2009年我参加了公务员考试，现在，我已经在中国人民银行忻州市中心支行工作两年时间了。在银行，我主要负责电脑和网络的维护。因为我积极认真的工作态度，我受到领导和同事的一致好评。业余时间里我阅读了很多管理类的杂志。在这里我想着重介绍一下，在大学期间我曾进行过自主创业，在淘宝，ebay开网店，主要销售数码产品和电脑配件，我面对很多从未遇到的困难，但是我相信：没有失败哪来成功。那段时间我获得了物质和精神的双丰收。正是因为那段经历，我选择报考了工商管理硕士。我希望通过两年时间系统学习管理学知识，全面提升自己的综合素质，为自己的职业生涯发展奠定良好的理论和思想基础，通过深造完成自己的职业转型。

Answer 1

Good afternoon, fellow teachers,

I am pleased to participate in this interview. I come from Shanxi, I am 25 years old, I graduated from Beijing University of Chemical Technology, my major is Electronic Science and Technology. In 2009 I participated in the civil service exam, and now, I've been in Xinzhou city branch of the People's Bank of China two years time. In the bank, I was responsible for computer and network maintenance. Because I am active and serious working attitude, I was leading and colleagues alike. I read a lot of spare time Management magazine. Here I would like to highlight what, in college, I had taken their own businesses, in Taobao, ebay starting an online shop, which sells digital products and computer accessories, I have never been faced with many difficulties, but I believe: no Failure would be no success. During that time I got a double harvest the material and spiritual. Because of that experience, I chose to apply for a Master of Business Administration. I hope that the learning management system through two years of knowledge, to enhance the overall quality of their own for their own career development theories and ideas lay a good foundation, through the completion of his postgraduate career transition.

Answer 2

Fellow teachers are good in the afternoon, I very happy can participate in this interview. I from Shanxi, my this year 25 years old, I graduate from Beijing Chemical industry University, my specialty is the electronic science and the technology. in 2009 I participated in the official test, now, I already worked in the People's Bank of China Xinzhou Town center Sub-branch for two years. In bank, my primary cognizance computer and network maintenance. Because of I positive earnest work, I receive the leader and colleague's consistent high praise. In the spare time I read many management class magazines. Wants to introduce emphatically in here me, in university period I once had carried on the independent undertaking, is washing the treasure, ebay opens the net shop, mainly sells the digital product and the computer fitting, I facing the difficulty which many never meets, but I believed: Which hasn't been defeated succeeds. That period of time I have obtained material and the spiritual double abundant harvest. Is precisely because of that experiences, I chose have registered for the MBA degree. I hoped that through two year system study management science knowledge, promotes own overall quality comprehensively, establishes the good theory and the ideological foundation for own professional profession development, through pursues advanced studies to complete own occupation reforming.

追问

认真翻译下啊,真的着急,你这个不行啊

Answer 3

首先，楼主那个叫囡囡球想害你- -！晕，估计是用有道的- -！别信它...语法错的简直太搞笑了o(∩_∩)o...哈哈，还有，楼上那位我算服了你了，大学的专业不应该用specialty好不- -！大学的专业要用major才准确- -！（也就是主修）specialty- -？我记得有个意思是特色菜吧，哈哈，你就那么爱吃吖~哈哈哈
下面是我自己人工手工翻译的（花了我快两个小时...)
语法我校对过了，词语上也特别注意，哦，兄弟对了，我帮你翻译的时候顺便帮你吧你要翻译的东西分段了，还有，额，把你在文中的语气改“好听”了点，因为翻译不可能一字一珠完全按照原文翻译，有些地方我翻过去的时候是按照比较英文的语气了，地道点嘛，可是完全的意思呢，我已经传达过去了，语气也好了很多，呵呵，应该可以给导师留个好印象吧o(∩_∩)o...嗯嗯，再一次祝福你！兄弟好好干哦~祝你成功。（快六点了，我也该睡了...先闪咯）
好了，译文如下：
Good afternoon my teacher
Firstly,it is my honour to attend this interview.i am 25 this year and I come from shanxi, I graduated from beijing of university of chemicial technology,my major in school is electronic science and technology. In the year of 2009 I took part in the civil service examination, and till now,I have been worked in the PBOC for two years.in the place i work,I charge myself with the part of maintaining computer and network.and I make the right direction and the attitude in my work,so I always be praised by my leader and colleague. in the mean time,I love to read the magazine which is always about the management.in fact I had also attempted to set up my business alone,yeah! Those days !Those days in Tao bao net and in ebay,I sell digital product and computer fittings,ah! That was tough time to work alone.I face so much difficult situation,but I am not afraid because I believe:if you have never lose that you will never truly succeed,and then time by time bit by bit finally,i figure it up!!!not only I earn the money from it,but also i learn a lot of it.
To me,those days mean a lot ,and I learn from those days that my degree is still not good enough. I should learn more! So i decide to take the MBA examination. I do hope that after spending two years in studying in management,I will improve and make myself completed.
i think this two years of studying will become the solid foundation for my working career,
after then,I will become another brand new me!
I promise

各位老师下午好，我很高兴能参加这次面试。我从山西来，我今年25岁，我毕业于北京化工大学，我的专业是电子科学与技术。2009年我参加了公务员考试，现在，我已经在中国人民银行忻州市中心支行工作两年时间了。在银行，我主要负责电脑和网络的维护。因为我积极认真的工作态度，我受到领导和同事的一致好评。业余时间里我阅读了很多管理类的杂志。在这里我想着重介绍一下，在大学期间我曾进行过自主创业，在淘宝，ebay开网店，主要销售数码产品和电脑配件，我面对很多从未遇到的困难，但是我相信：没有失败哪来成功。那段时间我获得了物质和精神的双丰收。正是因为那段经历，我选择报考了工商管理硕士。我希望通过两年时间系统学习管理学知识，全面提升自己的综合素质，为自己的职业生涯发展奠定良好的理论和思想基础，通过深造完成自己的职业转型。

追问

谢谢你啊,可是我发现你的翻译也不太准确啊

追答

自己修改了下~让你的语气变得“谦虚”还有“自信”了点^_^
特别是后面两句，太空洞太官方了，所以就帮你改了下，额额，在英语来说语气顺了点吧...

Answer 4

My fellow teachers, good afternoon.I am very pleased to participate in this interview.I come from Shanxi, I am 25 years old, I graduated from Beijing University of Chemical Technology, my major is Electronic Science and Technology.In 2009 I participated in the civil service exam, and now, I've been in Xinzhou city branch of the People's Bank of China two years time.In the bank, I was responsible for computer and network maintenance.Because I am active and serious working attitude, I was leading and colleagues alike.I read a lot of spare time Management magazine.Here I would like to highlight what, in college, I had taken their own businesses, in Taobao, ebay starting an online shop, which sells digital products and computer accessories, I have never been faced with many difficulties, but I believe: no Failure would be no success.During that time I got a double harvest the material and spiritual.Is precisely because of that experiences, I chose have registered for the MBA degree. I hoped that through two year system study management science knowledge, promotes own overall quality comprehensively, establishes the good theory and the ideological foundation for own professional profession development, through pursues advanced studies to complete own occupation reforming.

Answer 5

唔，口语化地翻一下哈,为了让语句刘畅稍微修改了一下你的表达和语句顺序，不过内容都在了(不过坦白说，我觉得你的本科专业和2年工作经验都和MBA的关联性不是很大，你其实可以说说你在银行的前景——比如有提升到管理层的可能性或者有这样的目标，还比较好；还有就是我不是很明白你说2009参加公务员考试是什么意思，是说这和你现在的工作有因果关系？）：
Good afternoon, it's my pleasure to take part in this interview and have a chance to present myself to you. I am 25 years old now, and have been working in the Qizhou centre branch of PBOC(People's Bank of China), which is located in Shanxi Qizhou, in charge of computer and network maintenance for 2 years after graduated from Beijing University of Chemical Technology, where I was major in electricity science and technology. I am the one who always positive and hard working, which earned the consistent high praise from my leadership and colleagues.(这句话好难翻……不符合英文自我介绍的习惯，“一致好评”这种话听起来很空，其实你可以直接说：My leadership and colleagues regard me as the one who always positive and hard working.）I have read many management magazines during my leisure time(举例：like McKinsey?你看的比较知名的杂志名举两个）, besides, I took the civil service examination in 2009. Here I'd like to emphasize my experience about entrepreneurship: I start my first try when I was still an undergraduate, I ran online store that sale digital products and computer accessories on both Taobao and ebay, during that time I have faced many difficulties which I have never meet or even imaged before; but I told myself: failure is the mother of success, and the experience of that period became one of my most valuable memory, as it gave me great value both in material, in term of money, and spirit, in term of the learnt something one will never learn from school. In fact, this experience is my original motivation of taking a MBA programme. I want a career transition, from science and technology to management and entrepreneurship, by further system study of the knowledge about management. This two-year programme is thus a perfect fit my need(最后这句实在太中式了，我翻得可能看起来少词，但其实意思是一样的),
大概就是这样，希望对你有帮助^_^

Answer 6

Good afternoon, fellow teachers, I am pleased to participate in this interview. I come from Shanxi, I am 25 years old, I graduated from Beijing University of Chemical Technology, my major is Electronic Science and Technology. In 2009 I participated in the civil service exam, and now, I've been in Xinzhou city branch of the People's Bank of China two years time. In the bank, I was responsible for computer and network maintenance. Because I am active and serious working attitude, I was leading and colleagues alike. I read a lot of spare time Management magazine. Here I would like to highlight what, in college, I had taken their own businesses, in Taobao, ebay starting an online shop, which sells digital products and computer accessories, I have never been faced with many difficulties, but I believe: no Failure would be no success. During that time I got a double harvest the material and spiritual. Because of that experience, I chose to apply for a Master of Business Administration. I hope that the learning management system through two years of knowledge, to enhance the overall quality of their own for their own career development theories and ideas lay a good foundation, through the completion of his postgraduate career transition.