求一篇120字左右的英语作文。

Question

随着社会竞争日益激烈，父母忙于工作，无暇照顾孩子，从而选择用金钱的方式奖励孩子在学习上的进步。请你用英语写一篇120字左右的短文，简要地分析产生这种现象的原因，着重谈谈你对此现象的看法。

Answer 1

In modern times ，more and more parents devote their energy to their career due to fierce competition ，thus caring less about their children 。Many of them tend to reward their children with money for the progress they have made in their studies。
However，I don't think this is a practical and proper way。Firstly ，if the children are always rewarded with money once getting high marks ，their attention will focus on money instead of the pleasure of studying 。More seriously ，study ，in their eyes，will become a trade rather than his own business ，which will attract harms but an advantage 。Secondly ，too much money will spoil the children ，for they are too young to make good use of it。I think a hug and a kiss will work better than money。