哈利波特

Question

我是初三的英菜，请各位大哥大M们多指教。中英均可。
I fell <<Harry Potter>> is beautiful I like it very much It is different from other movies It is more beautiful than
others harry and his ciassmeats strive together in order to save their school They use their magic to save the magic
world Ifell theyare very fantasic They are the world hero They don't make me letdown Facing their foe they don't
fell afraid Sometimes Iwant to become agood magician But I know Ican't So the <<Harry Potter>> becomes a box of my
dream.

Answer 1

译文：
我觉得《哈利波特》很好，我非常喜欢，它与其他电影不同。它比其他的同类故事好。哈利和他的同学一起为拯救他们的学校而冒险，他们使用魔法来保护魔法世界。我觉得他们是好样的，他们是世界的英雄，他们从不让我失望。面对敌人时他们毫不畏惧。有时我想变成一个优秀的魔法师，但是我知道我做不到。因此《哈利波特》成为我梦想的寄托。

看在翻译辛苦的份上把分给我吧……

Answer 2

我认为<<Harry Potter>> 是非常好看的。我横喜欢它。它太与众不同与其他电影点点~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~悬赏太少。 楼上大哥！！！是英语老师吗？
我是课代表！！！！
按上海中考 18 分英语作文评分
8——8——3
词汇晕 扣3 ——5分
语法晕的平方 +据是单一 扣4分左右
文采点点 3分扣光！！（去年上海作文满分好像才十几个所以不麽太伤心）！！！！

Answer 3

这篇>>>错误较多啊
首先feel写成了fell
foe你是指只有一个吗?为什么不用复数
英文中没有书名号 而是把书名设置为斜体代替 或者明显点加个引号
还有make me let down应该直接let me down就ok了
句式比较单调
有些词一看就是查了辞典知道了意思但不熟悉其通常用法的
加油吧~

Answer 4

I love Harry Potter very much ，too.I read the first Harry Potter book when I was in grade three,and I soon loved it .I like Harry ,Rone and Herminy.Their friendship really make me feel warm.
The Harry Potter book together with me went through my childhood.
I will not forget it ,and I think it is my forever friend.

Answer 5

I am a harry potter fan, I love it very much. actually, I am personally being Harry potter, all my friends at school call me Harry potter. and I am very popular in my school too. haaaa, Harry potter make me great!!!