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Question

本人英语不才,尤其翻译.
要求:
1.语法小问题忽略
2.看的是搭配,希望指出更合适的搭配
请指出哪里用法不够恰当和专业并指正
我觉得翻译地太没水平了
3.答案请贴在*回帖*里,我会选出*若干*最佳并以适当手段给分
#分 完全 不是问题###.
4.不要发夸奖语,漫骂语
5.期待您的指教
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只说不做不会给最佳的,放弃吧

Answer 1

Firstly ,congratulations to Rafeal Nadal,who is the AustralianOpen2009 champion.The same to Serina Williams.

首先，我们祝贺赢得AustralianOpen2009冠军头衔的Rafeal Nadal，同样也祝贺
Serina Williams

I think in today's women tennis world,it still
but no one has the overwhelming power to aim first

我认为在当今世界女子网坛中，依然没有人拥有压倒性的实力去夺取第一

On real technical, i think there're three players among the top: Sharapova,Venus Williams, if not including Henin who has retired,Ivanovic may be among the top three

在技术层面上，我认为有3名出色的顶级选手：莎拉波娃，大威廉姆斯，如果不算已经退役的海宁，Ivanovic 也算得上是3巨头之一

But none of them has the overwhelming power to aim first except Henin, however, she has retired already.
What's more,even Henin has the serious problem of unstablity.

但是她们中除了海宁以外，没有一个人拥有绝对的实力能保证夺取头名，不过海宁已经退役了，更何况，即使是海宁也有严重的发挥不稳定性这种问题存在

Without any words,Wimbledon Open has proved anything. It's really a pity that Ivanovic,who has wonderful skills and a much stronger body than Sharapova, always did some poor plays.

事实胜于雄辩，温网就是一个例子，拥有精湛技术和比莎拉波娃更强壮体魄的Ivanovic总是打出一些糟糕的比赛，这不可谓是一种遗憾

Even if she won ZhengJie in Wimbledon Open, she has no advantage over Szavay or Vaidisova, let alone the Williams.

在温网中，她即使赢了郑洁，但是在对阵Szavay 或 Vaidisova的时候却无优势可言，更不用说Williams了

In women tennis world, i'm more optimistic about younger players. Compared with Sharapova, i regard Ivanovic better.

在女子网坛中，我更喜欢年轻一点儿的选手。相比于莎拉波娃，我更欣赏
Ivanovic

The advantage of Sharapova is her good skills and height, at least she does not lose in any sports except weightlifting and F1.
However, she's too thin.

莎拉波娃的优势在于良好的技术和挺拔的身高，至少除了举重和F1， 在其他体育项目中，她也不会吃什么亏。不过，她还是太瘦了

Ivanovic is shorter than Sha,but heavier, so her advantage of power is reflected obviously.

虽然Ivanovic身高不比莎娃，不过在体重上有着优势，因此她的力量优势很明显地展现出来

Her skills are not bad,and owns a good body, i believe she has a better future.

她的技术也不差，还有他有一副好身体，我相信她会有更好的发展

There's no controversy in men, the masters are the two guys, mastering in different courts

男子方面没有什么争议，大师级的就这2位选手，他们分别在不同的场地上有着自己的建树

Although that Nadal has broken Federer's dream of mastering on grass court, Federer is still the best now for he is the most comprehensive

尽管纳达尔已经打破了费德勒统治草场的美梦，但是费德勒依然是当今最全面的优秀选手

He did well in no matter on hardcourt, grass or on red clay, and that's enough.
The fact that he failed is not that he played bad, but that Nadal improved so fast

他在硬地，草地，或者红土场上发挥都很出色，这就很说明问题了。
事实上，他输球的原因并不是打得不好，而是在于纳达尔进步神速

What's more, his inner problem has caused it. The modest and gentle Federer can no longer be found,
and that's probably caused by Nadal's power, particularly in the situation that Nadal was leading the game

更为重要的是，他在心态上的问题也导致了失利。那个风度翩翩的费德勒不见了，这应该是他所面对的对手是强悍的纳德尔，特别是在纳德尔领先的情况下

I prefer to look ahead to next year.
Nadal has got so much honor this year, but Federer will never give up.
After all, he is older, he may work harder next year to break the record of Sampras.
Nadal, without words, as one of his fans, i'll support him at any time.
As for others, they have a much longer way to go.

Answer 2

Firstly ,congratulations to Rafeal Nadal,who is the AustralianOpen2009 champion.The same to Serina Williams.

首先，我们祝贺赢得AustralianOpen2009冠军头衔的Rafeal Nadal，同样也祝贺
Serina Williams

I think in today's women tennis world,it still
but no one has the overwhelming power to aim first

我认为在当今世界女子网坛中，依然没有人拥有压倒性的实力去夺取第一

On real technical, i think there're three players among the top: Sharapova,Venus Williams, if not including Henin who has retired,Ivanovic may be among the top three

在技术层面上，我认为有3名出色的顶级选手：莎拉波娃，大威廉姆斯，如果不算已经退役的海宁，Ivanovic 也算得上是3巨头之一

But none of them has the overwhelming power to aim first except Henin, however, she has retired already.
What's more,even Henin has the serious problem of unstablity.

但是她们中除了海宁以外，没有一个人拥有绝对的实力能保证夺取头名，不过海宁已经退役了，更何况，即使是海宁也有严重的发挥不稳定性这种问题存在

Without any words,Wimbledon Open has proved anything. It's really a pity that Ivanovic,who has wonderful skills and a much stronger body than Sharapova, always did some poor plays.

事实胜于雄辩，温网就是一个例子，拥有精湛技术和比莎拉波娃更强壮体魄的Ivanovic总是打出一些糟糕的比赛，这不可谓是一种遗憾

Even if she won ZhengJie in Wimbledon Open, she has no advantage over Szavay or Vaidisova, let alone the Williams.

在温网中，她即使赢了郑洁，但是在对阵Szavay 或 Vaidisova的时候却无优势可言，更不用说Williams了

In women tennis world, i'm more optimistic about younger players. Compared with Sharapova, i regard Ivanovic better.

在女子网坛中，我更喜欢年轻一点儿的选手。相比于莎拉波娃，我更欣赏
Ivanovic

The advantage of Sharapova is her good skills and height, at least she does not lose in any sports except weightlifting and F1.
However, she's too thin.

莎拉波娃的优势在于良好的技术和挺拔的身高，至少除了举重和F1， 在其他体育项目中，她也不会吃什么亏。不过，她还是太瘦了

Ivanovic is shorter than Sha,but heavier, so her advantage of power is reflected obviously.

虽然Ivanovic身高不比莎娃，不过在体重上有着优势，因此她的力量优势很明显地展现出来

Her skills are not bad,and owns a good body, i believe she has a better future.

她的技术也不差，还有他有一副好身体，我相信她会有更好的发展

There's no controversy in men, the masters are the two guys, mastering in different courts

男子方面没有什么争议，大师级的就这2位选手，他们分别在不同的场地上有着自己的建树

Although that Nadal has broken Federer's dream of mastering on grass court, Federer is still the best now for he is the most comprehensive

尽管纳达尔已经打破了费德勒统治草场的美梦，但是费德勒依然是当今最全面的优秀选手

He did well in no matter on hardcourt, grass or on red clay, and that's enough.
The fact that he failed is not that he played bad, but that Nadal improved so fast

他在硬地，草地，或者红土场上发挥都很出色，这就很说明问题了。
事实上，他输球的原因并不是打得不好，而是在于纳达尔进步神速

What's more, his inner problem has caused it. The modest and gentle Federer can no longer be found,
and that's probably caused by Nadal's power, particularly in the situation that Nadal was leading the game

更为重要的是，他在心态上的问题也导致了失利。那个风度翩翩的费德勒不见了，这应该是他所面对的对手是强悍的纳德尔，特别是在纳德尔领先的情况下

I prefer to look ahead to next year.
Nadal has got so much honor this year, but Federer will never give up.
After all, he is older, he may work harder next year to break the record of Sampras.
Nadal, without words, as one of his fans, i'll support him at any time.
As for others, they have a much longer way to go.

我更期望于明年
纳达尔在今年广获殊荣，但是费天王是不会这么就放弃的
毕竟他已经不再年轻，明年他很可能更加拼命去破Sampras留下的记录
纳达尔，作为他的球迷，不用多说，我会义无反顾得支持他。对于其他选手，我想他们要走的路还很长

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