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摘要
随着Internet在全球的迅猛发展，电子商务作为21世纪信息时代经济活动全新的技术手段和方法，已成为Internet最广阔的应用领域。电子商务所带来的机遇和挑战，正受到世界各国政府和企业界的重视与积极的投入。电子商务企业化发展的大势所趋。本文首先论述了电子商务的发展趋势，接着论述了电子商务带来的机遇与挑战主要包括将导致产业结构的调整和经济要素的重组；将改变人们的消费方式；将改变传统的生产、管理和营销方式在给企业带来更多商机的同时，也带来更激烈的竞争；将带来一系列需要研究解决的法律问题和技术问题；将对政府的管理方式提出新的要求。最后从我国电子商务的进展和存在的问题与对策来表述如何发展我国的电子商务。
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Answer 1

Along with Internet in the global swift and violent development, theelectronic commerce took the 21st century information time economicactivity brand-new technology method and the method, have become theInternet broadest application domain. The electronic commerce bringsthe opportunity and the challenge, is receiving the various countriesgovernment and enterprise's value and the positive investment.Electronic commerce commercialization development ultimately. Thisarticle first will elaborate the electronic commerce developmenttendency, then elaborated the opportunity and the challenge which theelectronic commerce brings mainly includes causes the industrialstructure the adjustment and the economical essential factorreorganization; Will change people's expense way; Will changetraditional the production, the management and the marketing way whilebrings more opportunities to the enterprise, also will bring keencompetition; Will bring a series of needs to study the solution thelegal matter and the technical question; Will set the new request togovernment's management way. How finally indicates from our countryelectronic commerce progress and the existence question and thecountermeasure develops our country electronic commerce.
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Answer 2

With the rapid global development of Internet, as a new technological method of economic activity in 21 Centenary Information Age, Electronic Commerce has already become the most widely applied area in Internet. Those opportunities and challenges come with electronic commerce are rewarding recognition and activity devotion from global grovenments and enterprises. It is obviously that the trend of enterprise development is electronic commerce.Firstly, this article introduces the development of electronic commerce.Next it explains the opportunities and challenges of EC.Such as ledding to adjust industrial structure and recombine economic elements, changing the way of customer consume.When it changes the traditional way of product, management and marketing,EC also brings more vigorous competition for enterprise.EC may also cause a series of law and technological problems which need to be discussed and solved. And it also includes requirements of new government management method. Finally, this article will follow the progress, the existence problems and the countermeasure sections to indicate how to develop the electronic commerce of our country.

Answer 3

Along with Internet in the global swift and violent development, electronic commerce took the 21st century information age economic activity brand-new technology method and the method, have become the Internet broadest application domain. Electronic commerce brings the opportunity and the challenge, is receiving the various countries government and the business community value and the positive investment. Electronic commerce commercialization development ultimately. This article first elaborated the electronic commerce trend of development, then elaborated the opportunity and the challenge which electronic commerce brings mainly includes causes the industrial structure the adjustment and the economical essential factor reorganization; Will change people's expense way; Will change traditional the production, the management and the marketing way while brings more opportunities to the enterprise, also brings the keen competition; Will bring a series of needs to study the solution the legal matter and the technical question; Will set the new request to government's management way. How finally indicates from our country electronic commerce progress and the existence question and the countermeasure develops our country's electronic commerce.

Answer 4

The economy activity completely new technology means and the method of e-commerce as 21 centuries information age has become the application domain that Internet is the most vast to the swift and violent development made a summary along with Internet in the whole world .
The input that the opportunity that the e-commerce is brought is suffering that each country of world government and enterprise circle attaches importance to with challenges and positively .
The general trend developed is run as a commercial basis to the e-commerce .
The development trend of e-commerce has firstly been discussed in this text , the opportunity that the e-commerce was brought has then been discussed with challenging the major heavy group that includes adjustment that will lead to the industrial structure and economic essential factor
The consumption method of people will be changed
Will change the production , management and marketing method of tradition brings at the same time even more Shang Ji , and also bring the intenser competition to the enterprise
Will bring a series of needs to study the law problems and technology problem solved
The new requirement will be put forward to the management method of government .
The problem finally following the progress of our country e-commerce and existence is explained how to develop the e-commerce of our country with the countermeasure