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嗨，有段时间没联络了。还好吗？天冷，注意健康。

自从香港回来后，我终于可以入睡了，在香港的第二天我就睡的很好－－－因为我知道结果了。而之前，我一直失眠，头痛的很难受－－－在律师用E－mail给我寄发资料之后，我神经太紧张了。到了她邮寄来信件时，更是达到了顶点。现在好多了。

我很感谢大家为我做的一切，尽管结果不尽如人意，我还是十分感激，我有时想起在香港时受到的诘问，真觉得很有道理，我何德何能，可以得到上天的眷顾呢？但是还是得到了帮助。而且帮我的人比我自己更关切事态的进展。令我更加惭愧。

在香港，那天，当我走出（地名），我有些失望，不，坦率说，应该是很失望。我失望的倒不是自己的前途，而是自责自己的不成功辜负了大家的期望，尤其是我妈妈的期望。我原以为香港之行是可以给她送上一份最好的新年礼物。那天我失落地走在中环的街上，我之前听从了香港伯母的吩咐：办完事后可以坐“dim’dim”（有轨电车）浏览港岛。于是我走到车站，可是等上很长一段时间，居然没有可以送我去目的地的，我都要哭了－－－太残忍了。于是我沿着路轨走，走到我觉得累了。跳上一架“叮叮”，车上没什么人，只有几个洋人在摄录街景。他们见到我，友善地打个招呼，我觉的好多了。觉得自己太傻了。接下来的时间，我在香港漫无目的地游荡，直到我回到深圳。我才真的觉得事情告一段落了。

我知道，接下来的事要你出面完成，尽管我不清楚结局如何，我还是有些愧疚，因为我觉得你本来不必做这么多麻烦事的。你怎么看这个事情？你觉得烦躁吗？

还有一个月就要过春节了，先祝你新年顺利。也祝愿你的家人。代问爷爷奶奶好。下次再说。

P.S：鲤鱼图腾源自中国的神话传说。黄河的鲤鱼在某一特殊的时刻，可以通过跳过‘龙门峡’变成真正的龙－－－尽管它们之前是龙种，但还不是龙。因为天界不需要那么多的龙，所以鲤鱼跳‘龙门峡’时，总会放雷电来打击它，失败者，会被雷电烧焦鱼尾，而它们不甘心失败，会继续等待机会，不断的尝试，以改变自己的命运。它们是坚强的化身，同时，对於成为龙的鲤鱼而言，这又是幸运的意思。这就是鲤鱼图腾的象征（代表男性）－－－坚毅、幸运、。或许问问你的日裔朋友，他们会讲述的更精彩，他们的叙述或许与我讲得有出入，这是正常的。

Answer 1

嗨，有段时间没联络了。还好吗？天冷，注意健康。
Hi, long time no see. How are you? The weather is cold; take care of your heath...
自从香港回来后，我终于可以入睡了，在香港的第二天我就睡的很好－－－因为我知道结果了。而之前，我一直失眠，头痛的很难受－－－在律师用E－mail给我寄发资料之后，我神经太紧张了。到了她邮寄来信件时，更是达到了顶点。现在好多了。
Since coming from Hong Kong, I can drop asleep eventually. I already slept very well in Hong Kong the second day-----because I had known the result. But before that, I could not fell to sleep all the time, and felt very bitter by headache------after the lawyer sent me the documents; my nerve was held very tight onto myself. It came to the top when she sent me the letter. But now things are better.
我很感谢大家为我做的一切，尽管结果不尽如人意，我还是十分感激，我有时想起在香港时受到的诘问，真觉得很有道理，我何德何能，可以得到上天的眷顾呢？但是还是得到了帮助。而且帮我的人比我自己更关切事态的进展。令我更加惭愧。
I am grateful to everyone for all he has done for me, even though the result was not as famous as we hoped, I appreciate it very much, sometimes when I thank about the heckle coming up against me in Hong Kong, I felt it was really with the reason, what virtue and ability do I have, that can I get the favor from God? And those who helping me are more concerned the programs of the state of the affair. That makes me feel ashamed much more.
在香港，那天，当我走出（地名），我有些失望，不，坦率说，应该是很失望。我失望的倒不是自己的前途，而是自责自己的不成功辜负了大家的期望，尤其是我妈妈的期望。我原以为香港之行是可以给她送上一份最好的新年礼物。那天我失落地走在中环的街上，我之前听从了香港伯母的吩咐：办完事后可以坐“dim’dim”（有轨电车）浏览港岛。
In Hong Kong, I felt a bit disappointed when I went out (-----) that day, no, frankly to say, I was very disappointed. What I felt disappointed was not my future but letting everybody especially my mother down because of my lost. Because at the former plan of Hong Kong trip, I could deliver her a new year’s gift. I walked along the middle ring street losing my heart that day, before the time, I had been listened to my auntie who is in Hong Kong: when finished the businesses, I could browse Hong Kong island by the “dim”.
于是我走到车站，可是等上很长一段时间，居然没有可以送我去目的地的，我都要哭了－－－太残忍了。于是我沿着路轨走，走到我觉得累了。跳上一架“叮叮”，车上没什么人，只有几个洋人在摄录街景。他们见到我，友善地打个招呼，我觉的好多了。觉得自己太傻了。接下来的时间，我在香港漫无目的地游荡，直到我回到深圳。我才真的觉得事情告一段落了。
So I walked down to the station, but even I waited a long time, there were not a single one could lead me to my destination, I almost cried out------it is too worst. Then I walked along the railway, until I felt tired. I jumped up into a “ding ding” car, No one on board, only a few foreigners in video scenes. When they saw me they said hello to me friendly, it let me feel better. And I felt I was very fool. The following time I was loitering in Hong Kong aimlessly. Until I returned to Shenzhen, I really didn’t think that things came to an end.
我知道，接下来的事要你出面完成，尽管我不清楚结局如何，我还是有些愧疚，因为我觉得你本来不必做这么多麻烦事的。你怎么看这个事情？你觉得烦躁吗？
I know that thing thereinafter must be accomplished by you, although I am not sure of the outcome, I was somewhat guilty, for you do not need to do so many trouble things originally. How do you look at this thing? Does it let you feel frustrated?
还有一个月就要过春节了，先祝你新年顺利。也祝愿你的家人。代问爷爷奶奶好。下次再说。
There is going to be the Spring Festival after one month, wish you and your family, all things are right in the New Year. Remember me to grandparents. Chatting next time.
P.S：鲤鱼图腾源自中国的神话传说。黄河的鲤鱼在某一特殊的时刻，可以通过跳过‘龙门峡’变成真正的龙－－－尽管它们之前是龙种，但还不是龙。因为天界不需要那么多的龙，所以鲤鱼跳‘龙门峡’时，总会放雷电来打击它，失败者，会被雷电烧焦鱼尾，而它们不甘心失败，会继续等待机会，不断的尝试，以改变自己的命运。它们是坚强的化身，同时，对於成为龙的鲤鱼而言，这又是幸运的意思。这就是鲤鱼图腾的象征（代表男性）－－－坚毅、幸运、。或许问问你的日裔朋友，他们会讲述的更精彩，他们的叙述或许与我讲得有出入，这是正常的。
Carp totem from the myths and legends of China. Yellow River carp in a particular moment. Can jump over the 'Dragon Gap' and change into the real dragon -- although they have the bloodline of dragon before, but they are not the real dragon. because the heaven does not need so much dragon, when the carp jump 'goal Gap', the heaven will send lightning to bit them, those who is lost will be burn the trail, but they unwilling to accept its defeat and will continue to wait for an opportunity to constantly try to change their own destiny. They are the embodiment of the strong, and as long for the carp, it is fortunate mean. This is the symbol of carp totem (on behalf of men) – perseverance, lucky. Perhaps if you ask a Japanese friend, they will be talking about that more wonderful, may be their description has some different from me. And this is normal.

Answer 2

Excuse me!May I come in?

Hai,you duan shi jian mei lian luo le.Hai hao ma?Tian leng,zhu yi jian kang.
Zi cong XiangGang hui lai hou,wo zhong yu ke yi ru shui le......

Me English is good!! Hehe

Answer 3

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Answer 4

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