第1个回答 2009-08-30
The first chapter:
Wednesday, July 15
Today, I did a very meaningful thing to do because Fu a grandmother to cross the road, grandma keeps complimenting me sensible, so I special pleasure.
Second:
Friday, July 24
Today, I went hiking in, and mother together, me and her game, who should to the Peak, whoever please eat
The result is I won. I said, Mom, if you win, things, or you ask, right? Mother replied: right! I thought to myself: my mother told me nice!
Title III:
Saturday, August 1
Unconsciously have passed a month and think in the last month,
I do not know what did matter, so I decided in August, the need to do some meaningful things
Part IV:
Thursday, August 13
These days, Typhoon Morak in Taiwan, has done a lot of "bad" It makes me think of last year's earthquake in Sichuan, to feel sympathy for Taiwan compatriots to donate his own with a small mind, do not want to see more people have been displaced.
The Fifth Article:
Sunday August 30
Today is good weather, I would like to have fun, because tomorrow we should report, and heart and excitement again depressed, pipe, he does, today's fun, like it, and I want to say goodbye to the summer!
第2个回答 2009-08-30
给你仔细做了一下,包括日期的写法,没错误的而且不显得太高难度
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July 15th,Wednesday
Today I have done a very meaningful thing,I helped a grandmother crossing road.and she keeps complimenting me a lot, so I was very happy.
July 24th, Friday
Today I have climbed a mountain with my mother,we played a game that to see who will first arrive the top,finally I won,I said" Mom, if you win, you will still buy me something right? mother replied: right! I thought: How nice was my mother!
August 1st, Saturday
A month has past before I know it, look back in the last month, I do not know what I have done, so I decided to do some meaningful things in August.
August 13rd, Thursday
Recently, Typhoon Morak in Taiwan has done a lot of "bad" things.It makes me think of last year's earthquake in Sichuan, I felt sympathetic to Taiwanese and have gave my little present,I do not want to to see more people have been lost their home.
August 30th, Sunday
Today is a fine day, I would like to have fun, because tomorrow we should go to school,and feel excited and depressed,forget it~,I only care today's fun, I have to say goodbye to my summer holidays!
一个一个翻译的,而且容易写和读,希望能帮助你,不过下次要记得自己尝试着写一下,呵呵
第3个回答 2009-08-30
我可以很负责的说,楼上的都有问题。
一二楼的绝对是网上翻的。四楼五楼也一样,只是加了汉语。六楼是自己翻的,但是只看第一段就有语法错误
I helped a grandmother crossing road.(应该是help sb do)
and she keeps complimenting me a lot, so I was very happy.(compliment意思是恭维,这个词用在这儿太大)
七楼语法错误更明显
Today, I have done something highly significant thing is helped an old woman across the road,(is helped 完全不对)
granny straight kua I sensible, so I'm happy.(kua是拼音)
第4个回答 2009-08-30
语法绝对正确!
The first chapter:
Wednesday, July 15
Today, I did a very meaningful thing to do because Fu a grandmother to cross the road, grandma keeps complimenting me sensible, so I special pleasure.
Second:
Friday, July 24
Today, I went hiking in, and mother together, me and her game, who should to the Peak, whoever please eat
The result is I won. I said, Mom, if you win, things, or you ask, right? Mother replied: right! I thought to myself: my mother told me nice!
Title III:
Saturday, August 1
Unconsciously have passed a month and think in the last month,
I do not know what did matter, so I decided in August, the need to do some meaningful things
Part IV:
Thursday, August 13
These days, Typhoon Morak in Taiwan, has done a lot of "bad" It makes me think of last year's earthquake in Sichuan, to feel sympathy for Taiwan compatriots to donate his own with a small mind, do not want to see more people have been displaced.
The Fifth Article:
Sunday August 30
Today is good weather, I would like to have fun, because tomorrow we should report, and heart and excitement again depressed, pipe, he does, today's fun, like it, and I want to say goodbye to the summer!
第5个回答 2009-08-30
riday, July 24
Today, I went hiking in, and mother together, me and her game, who should to the Peak, whoever please eat
The result is I won. I said, Mom, if you win, things, or you ask, right? Mother replied: right! I thought to myself: my mother told me nice!
Title III:
Saturday, August 1
Unconsciously have passed a month and think in the last month,
I do not know what did matter, so I decided in August, the need to do some meaningful things