这篇英语作文是否有错误，如果有请改正，急求~~~
I like Christmas best, it is just like our Spring Festival.
The name Christmas “Christ's Mass,'' A Mass is a kind of church service. Christmas is a
religious festival. There are special Christmas services in Christian churches all over
the world. But many of the festivities of Christmas do not have
anything to do with religion. Exchanging gifts and sending Christmas
cards are modern ways of making the Christmas season merry.
Maybe the Spring Festival is much more important and interesting than Christmas, but I like Christmas Day better. Because we can spend time with our friends and classmates during Christmas. When it is snowy, Christmas becomes much more lovely, just like in fairytales. I can imagine I am in a fairytale, the girl who sold the matches is my friend, the ugly duck becoming more and more beautiful and so on. What a beautiful place！ So we can also call Christmas “Snowy Lovely Day.”
On Christmas Day,We can go to the store to buy Christmas presents . There are so many Christmas cards, Christmas hats, Christmas dolls and many colourful things. The Christmas gift for a friend and say “Merry Christmas.” By the way, I think studying can also become much more interesting.
Christmas is coming, it also means a new year will come. Let's study harder to welcome the new year！
Christmas is my favorite holiday!
The named(被动语态) Christmas “Christ's Mass,'' A Mass is a kind of church service.Christmas is a
religious festival. There are special Christmas services in Christian churches all over
the world. But many of the festivities of Christmas do not have
anything to do with religion. Exchanging gifts and sending Christmas
cards are modern ways of making the Christmas season merry.
Maybe the Spring Festival is much more important and interesting than Christmas, but I like Christmas Day better. Because we can spend time with our friends and classmates during Christmas. When it is snowy, Christmas becomes much more lovely, just like in fairytales. I can imagine I am in a fairytale, the girl who sold the matches is my friend, the ugly duck becoming more and more beautiful and so on. What a beautiful place！ So we can also call Christmas “Snowy Lovely Day.”
On Christmas Day,We can go to the store to buy Christmas presents . There are so（这里把so换成too更好） many Christmas cards, Christmas hats, Christmas dolls and many（many应删去，前面主句中有了many） colourful things. The Christmas gifts(The表示这一类，应用复数) for a friend and say “Merry Christmas.” By the way, I think studying can also become much more interesting.
Christmas is coming, it also means a new year will come. Let's study harder to welcome the new year！
Christmas is my favorite holiday!
应该改正的地方后面有括号
这是翻译，你看看是不是你要表达的意思，这篇短文应该没有错
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