求懂英语的看看我这个短文里有没有语法错误,如果有 请帮我改正。谢谢 I also like doi

求懂英语的看看我这个短文里有没有语法错误,如果有 请帮我改正。谢谢
I also like doing experiment so I can understand you.But In my opinion do experiments at home is not allowed.Because I think It is so dangerous for you to do it at home.So it is can be understanded that you parents don't allow you to do it.They are afraid you get hurt.If you must do it.I think do it in the lab is a better choise.I hope my words can help you.

第1个回答  2014-11-14
I also like doing experiment so I can understand you.But in my opinion. doing. experiments at home is not allowed.Because I think It is so dangerous for you to do it at home.So it is can be understanded that your. parents don't allow you to do it.They are afraid of. you get hurt.If you must do it.
I think it is a better choise in the lab. I hope my words can help you.追答

打空格的是你错的

自己对照一下

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你为什么有的地方就是用it呢,比如Because I think It is dangerous for you to do it at home

不,打错了

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I also like doing experiments so I can understand you.But In my opinion it can't be allowed that doing experiments at home.Because I think It is dangerous for you to do it at home and them can be understood that your parents don't allow you to do them.Because they are afraid
of you will get hurt.If you must do them.I think doing them in the lab is a better choise.I hope my words can help you.您看看对么

I also like doing experiments so I can understand you.But In my opinion it can't be allowed that doing experiments at home.Because I think It is dangerous for you to do it at home and them can be understood that your parents don't allow you to do them.Because they are afraid
of you will get hurt.If you must do them.I think doing them in the lab is a better choise.I hope my words can help you.

I also like doing experiments so I can understand you.But In my opinion it can't be allowed that doing experiments at home.Because I think It is dangerous for you to do it at home and them can be understood that your parents don't allow you to do them.Because they are afraid
of you will get hurt.If you must do them.I think doing them in the lab is a better choise.I hope my words can help you.----

Because they are afraid
of you will get hurt.If you must do them.I think doing them in the lab is a better choise.I hope my words can help you.----

追问

不是be afraid of doing sth么

请帮帮我

追答

不是be afraid of (doing )sth么

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第2个回答  2014-11-14
错误太多追问

请帮我改一下,谢谢

追答

追问

必采纳

追答

6it~them7them~it you~your

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I also like doing experiments so I can understand you.But In my opinion it can't be allowed that doing experiments at home.Because I think It is dangerous for you to do them at home and It can be understood that you parents don't allow you to do them.Because they are afraid you will get hurt.If you must do them.I think doing them in the lab is a better choise.I hope my words can help you.

I also like doing experiments so I can understand you.But In my opinion it can't be allowed that doing experiments at home.Because I think It is dangerous for you to do it at home and them can be understood that your parents don't allow you to do them.Because they are afraid you will get hurt.If you must do them.I think doing them in the lab is a better choise.I hope my words can help you.

这里的them是指?

追答

experiments

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你为什么有的地方就是用it呢,比如Because I think It is dangerous for you to do it at home

追答

固定结构it's adj for sb to do something

do them,them指experiments

追问

Because I think It is dangerous for you to do them at home这么说对么

追答

yes

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