各位英语大咖来帮我看一下英语作文有没有错，有的话帮忙指出。例如语法错误，时态错误，拼写错误等。

Question

初二英语，帮忙看一下，不胜感谢。肯定有语法错误。

Answer 1

第一句话应改用现在时，Everyone has a childhood and so do I. 后面连着的三句话都不对，建议改为：I spent my childhood with my grandparents in a small village. 下面一句改为：They were my friends and very important to me. 接下来的到第一段结束没问题。 第二段中最后两句话合并为一句：I loved blue because it was like the color of my grandmother’s clothes.
第三段中，was able to 改为 could。He got me a best wish 改为He taught me, “ Actions speak louder than words. “

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