英文翻译（高手、专业进)高分!!!!写得好再另外给100分

Question

我想给一位老师写一封英文信，按照书信格式翻译。

XXX老师：
我亲爱的英文老师，您最近好吗？工作还顺利吗？我向您献上最真诚的问候。
我是您曾经的学生，两年前因为无知犯下了不可原谅的错误，触犯了学校的纪律，因此离开了学校，离开了您的教导。我虽然是个女生，但是当时很叛逆，如今我十分懊悔，很埋怨自己，并且感到了羞愧。我这种行为给学校丢脸，有可能造成别的同学的效仿，同时也影响了自己的学习。事后我想了很多，这个心结始终无法释怀，希望通过此信能得到您、校长以及班主任XXX的原谅。
此外，我要感激您，我曾经说过，您是在所有教过我的老师中我唯一最喜爱的。您知道为什么吗？我喜欢你的教育方式，之前，一上您的课，我在台下细细地观察你，你短短的头发精神抖擞，精致的五官美丽动人，而且你说着一口纯正流利的英语非常专业，声音响亮，上课也很生动，由此我非常崇拜你！还有一件事，不知道您有没有忘记，有一天中午，我和几个同学在教室玩扑克牌，被班主任训斥到了晚上12点都不可以离开学校，您一来，声音温和地说让我们回家吧，您的眼神，我忘不了。说实话，有的同学说不喜欢你，而且一见到你就躲起来，我觉得他们看错你了，你是一个非常优秀的好老师。
我最近读书非常勤奋，希望不辜负您的教导，希望以后有所作为来回报社会。这封信如果有错的地方，请多多包涵。另外送上的粽子，希望您喜欢吃。

祝你
端午节快乐
青春常驻
爱你的学生XXX
XX日XX月XX年

（注： 严格按照英文的书信格式翻译，内容不能漏掉，越详细越好，语法要正确，单词不能拼错，时态要正确！如果写得好，这100给你，另外我再联系你，再送你100分，一共两百分，我承诺！非常感激）
翻译器翻译的不要
不一定死的按照我说的句子翻译，意思一样也可以的

Answer 1

teacher:
My dear English teacher, you are going? Work is going well? I offer to you the most sincere greetings.
I am your former student, two years ago because of ignorance committed an unforgivable mistake, violated the school's discipline, and they left school, left to teach you. Although I am a girl, but was very rebellious, and now I am very remorseful, very blaming themselves, and felt ashamed. I am ashamed of this behavior to the school, may cause other students to emulate, but also affected their learning. Subsequently, I think a lot, this knot has not relieved, I hope this letter will get you through the principal and class teacher ... forgiveness.
In addition, I want to thank you, I said, you are all the teachers taught me my only favorite. You know why? I like your way of education, prior to your class one, and I observed you in the audience thin, short hair, your high spirits, fine facial features beautiful, and you spoke a native fluency in English is very professional , loud, very lively class, thus I worship you! One more thing, do not know if you have not forgotten, one day at noon, I and several classmates in the classroom, playing cards, was reprimanded by the class teacher to 0:00 can not leave school, you are the one, the voice said gently let us Go home, your eyes, I will never forget. To be honest, some students say no like you, and saw you hide, I think they are wrong you, you are a very good good teachers.
I recently read a very hard and hope to live up to your guidance, hope to do something back to society. This letter, if wrong place, please bear with me. Also sent to the dumplings, I hope you like to eat.

I wish you
Happy Dragon Boat Festival
Youthfulness

Love your students ...
10Japan,6Month,2010Years

OK Depressed, there are tired,

Answer 2

楼上都是机器翻译的，太不厚道了吧。楼主我自己翻的。。。我是留学生啊，相信我吧。嘻嘻
Dear teacher XXX，
My dear English teacher, My sincere greeting to you. I hope this letter finds you well, so is your job.
I don’t know if you still remember me, your former student, once a rebellious young girl, ignorantly violated school disciplines, caused an irreversible mistake two years ago, resulted in my drop out from the school and your teaching. I am terribly regretful, I have been blaming myself for what I did, and felt deeply ashamed. What I did have shamed and embarrassed my school, other school mates are likely to imitate my deeds, as a result my study was inevitably affected. I have thought a lot afterwards, and found myself unable to get over it. Through this very letter I’d like to give my heartfelt apology and implore for forgiveness from you, principal and our head teacher XXX to untie the knots in my heart.
Teacher XXX, I am grateful for you, once I mentioned you were my only favorite teacher in my life. Do you know why? I think it has to do with your teaching methods. Back then, I used to observe you carefully and secretly in your class, I admired your short hair, they made you look energetic, your delicate face were engaging to see, and your pure English and ringing voice showed how professional you were, your classes were always full of liveliness. All these built up my adoration to you! Oh, I don’t know if you still remember the other day, it was noon, I was playing cards with a few classmates in the classroom, our head teacher caught us and put us in detention till the midnight, and then you came along, with tenderness of your voice, you asked (him/her) to let us go home. I could not forget the leniency in your eyes. To be honest, there were some students didn’t like you, and they would avoid running into you. I just want to say, they didn’t appreciate you and they were wrong., you were and will always be an excellent teacher.
I have been studying very diligently recently, I will never let you down. I hope that one day I could contribute my effort to the society. Please pardon my mistakes(if there is any) with regards to this letter. I hope you like my zongzi.

Wish you
Happy Dragon Boat Festival
and forever young

Yours XXX
June 10 2010

Answer 3

My dear English teacher, you recently? So, how's work? I give you the most sincere greetings.
I am the student, you have made two years ago because of ignorance, unforgivable mistake broke the school discipline, thus leaving school, leave your teachings. Although I am a girl, but was very rebellious, I now very regret, blame yourself, and feel ashamed. I this behavior to school disgrace, is likely to cause the other students, but also affected their own learning. Afterwards I think a lot of, this can always hope this letter can get you through the teacher in charge of XXX, and forgive.
In addition, I must thank you, I once said, are you in all of my teachers I only favorite. Do you know why? I like your education mode, before your class a, I observed in length you, short hair jingshendousou, delicate facial feature beautiful and moving, but you speak fluent English very professional integrity, sound loud, class is vivid, thus I admire you very much! Another thing, don't know you have forgotten, one at noon, I and some students in the classroom, the teacher scolded by playing CARDS at 12:00 at night can not leave school, your voice said softly, let's go home, your eyes, I will never forget. To tell you the truth, some classmate say don't like you, and see you hide, I think they look wrong you, you are a very good teacher.
I recently read very hard, want not betray your teachings, hoped later as to return society. This letter is wrong place, if you please. On the other, hope you like to eat dumplings.

Wish you
Dragon Boat Festival is happy
Youth permanent
Love your students

Answer 4

XXX teacher:
My English teacher, you recently? So, how's work? I give you the most sincere greetings.
I am the student, you have made two years ago because of ignorance, unforgivable mistake broke the school discipline, thus leaving school, leave your teachings. Although I am a girl, but was very rebellious, I now very regret, blame yourself, and feel ashamed. I this behavior to school disgrace, is likely to cause the other students, but also affected their own learning. Afterwards I think a lot of, this can always hope this letter can get you through the teacher in charge of XXX, and forgive.
In addition, I must thank you, I once said, are you in all of my teachers I only favorite. Do you know why? I like your education mode, before your class a, I observed in length you, short hair jingshendousou, delicate facial feature beautiful and moving, but you speak fluent English very professional integrity, sound loud, class is vivid, thus I admire you very much! Another thing, don't know you have forgotten, one at noon, I and some students in the classroom, the teacher scolded by playing CARDS at 12:00 at night can not leave school, your voice said softly, let's go home, your eyes, I will never forget. To tell you the truth, some classmate say don't like you, and see you hide, I think they look wrong you, you are a very good teacher.
I recently read very hard, want not betray your teachings, hoped later as to return society. This letter is wrong place, if you please. On the other, hope you like to eat dumplings.

Wish you
Dragon Boat Festival is happy
Youth permanent
Love your students XXX
XX, XX month in XX