请帮忙我一段英文的1分钟自我介绍，我考试要用！明天就要考试了！！

Question

大家好，我是XXX。我今年13岁了。我是个活泼开朗的女孩，我喜欢画画和写作，我的一篇作文曾在书刊上发表过。我喜欢的科目是英语和语文。我喜欢夏天，因为那是个会发生很多故事的季节。我喜欢蓝色和黑色。外国语是我梦寐以求想要考上的初中，我在不停的努力。我的格言是：早起的鸟儿有虫吃！

谢谢各位了~~为了小妹的成绩~~亲们帮忙下啦~~
PS：不要什么翻译网站来的，就要自己写的，语法要正确啊！！要一分钟的、么么

Answer 1

Hello, everyone. My name is````. I am 13, a lively and optimistic girl.My hobby is painting and writting, and I had a writting issued in a book. My favorite subjects are English and Chinese. I love summer for it is a season full of stories. I am fond of blue and black. The Foreign Language Junior High School has been my dream school that I have been working hard for. There has always been a motto in my mind: The earlier you take action, the more you will gain.
小姑娘，真那么喜欢外语，再难也要自己试着用外语表达出来。希望以后你能努力做到。加油！

Answer 2

Hello,everyone.My name is XXX.I'm 13 years old.I'm a lively girl,I like drawing pictures and writing,one of my composition has been published in a perioical.My favourite subject is English and Chinese.My favorite season is summer,because it's a season filled with stories.I like blue and black.Going to Foreign Language School is my dream,I'm working hard all the time.My motto is:The early bird catches the worm!