求一篇写妈妈生日的英语作文

Question

要50词左右！
六年级上册的水平！
最好用上：birthday parents friends presents like happy (用不上不勉强）
这篇文章咋样！（我自己做的，不好的地方请指点！）
my mother's birthday
My mother's birthday is on the eighth of July .In the morning my father and I went shopping and bought a very nice cake . In the afternoon ,I gave a comb to mother ,my mother was very excited!
In the evening we sang the song "happy birthday to you "to mother.After supper ,we ate birthday cake.
we were very happy!
(千辛万苦才打完的啊！我才六年级的水平啊，请多多指教，评论一下！）

Answer 1

Do you still remember the time I didn't come home when shcool day's over juest because I was not allowed to watch TV before homework's done? It appears that I can know still hear the voice from you throast when you were looking for me all around. That night was the first time I've ever cried. And I sweared I'll love you more than anybody else from then on.
（叙述一些小事来体现妈妈对你的关心和帮助）
Here, your birthday's coming soon. As what I always do, I wish you to live a happy and healthy life forever.
（表达对妈妈的祝福：祝妈妈健康、快乐）
Love from

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