请大家帮忙修改一下英语作文
请大家帮忙修改一下英语作文
From this cartoon we can know some thing about the life. A man just keep walking ingoring the wall on his way which a big word written on it, ”Stop”. Without doublt, he broke his nose. Under the cartoon, there is some explain for it-----“if you just walking next time, you will get hurt much more serious!”
We can find out something-----sometimes we should learn to give up! And change the way. life is full of ups and downs, the difficult might be easy to solve, and on the contrary, in some situations, we fail because we are on the wrong way. To be cleaver, checking what we paid, what we got, and what we lose, then figure out the right avenue.
There is a classic experiment which supporting my view. Scientists put some white mouse in the 迷宫, and try to see will the mouse find its way. Actually, the mouse try one time when the way is a dead way. They’ll get their new way after hit the wall. In the end, mouse are succeed in coming out!
Don’t get lose in the same place for twice! It is fool!
请大家帮我修改一下英语作文 : The hero in my eyes
In my opinion, a policeman is the hero in my eyes. In fact policemen can be seen everywhere. They catch thieves as well as keep our cities safe.In other words, we can't live without them. If people lose something, a policeman will try to find it for them.If people need...
请大家帮忙修改一下英语作文吧,谢谢啦
In the first place（一般就用firstly，secondly，当然你这样写也没错，但这样老师会认为你在凑字数） , failure may lead to success.People who strongly support it (原句中定语从句没有谓语动词，你也可以改成the strong backers ，这样更简洁）assert that we can learn from the failure so tha...
请大家帮我修改一下这篇英语作文(初三水平)
You can buy many beautiful pen-bags which were did by ourselves in there.(你的原句）这句里面的错误有 were 和did2个动词一起并列，in there副词前面还带介词。You和ourselves 指示关系矛盾。可以改为：You can buy many beautiful DIY pen-bags there.(不用强调是我们，或是谁做的，你说...
请帮忙改改英语作文.
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请大家帮忙修改一篇英语作文。
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请帮忙修改下面的英语作文
delicious food.She want to go to visit many friends in New York..When I feel down,she always cares about me.I really appreciate her as a life-time friends.I hope we will be best friends forever.整体来说段落很简单，也很质朴。但是很多地方重复的太多。最后一句话尤其是。
我自己写的一篇四级英语作文,请高手帮忙在原文的基础上修改,纠正语法错 ...
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麻烦各位英语高手帮忙修改篇英语作文、谢谢、
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请英语高手帮忙修改英语作文。。(很着急)
Shenzhen is calling Summer si coming.In this hot summer holiday.Why not go to the Shenzhen city.Shenzhen is a model cities. It is very beautiful.The trees is brown.You can smell flowers exhale a pleasant perfume.Splendid China is one of the beautiful scenic areas of Shenzhen.It...
请人修改下英语作文(很重要的.求你们了!)
when you walk on Shangxiajiu Commercial Pedestrian Street, it is a big culture shock for you.Walking pass (the street) and you well(will) see many old buildings on both side(sides) of the streets. These buildings were builded in (the)1930s.They show you what was (the)old ...
