紧急，高分。劳驾英语高手帮我看一小段文章
希望将语法错误或者用的不太合适的地方帮我指明一下，这个文档紧急，在线等。如果回答很合适会追加分。谢谢大家帮忙了。。。
这是写给老师的一段话，语气要求尽量客气尊敬：
(State the reason why you chose to apply to this university.)
Since I have studied polymer materials for more than three years, I have built up my interest in it, so I’d like to devote myself to this field. As we know, Japan take possession of the most advanced scientific technology in Asia or even in the world, so I’m eager to go to Japan to continue my study.
In addition, I love Japanese culture since my childhood, such as Japanese TV play, cartoon and traditional etiquette, which leads me to study Japanese by myself in my part-time and have reached the modern level.
Moreover, I have a relatively wealthy family so that can afford my tuition and daily spending.
Fortunately, I met Dr.Shui who taught me professional Japanese recently. He is an excellent professor who has finished his bachelor, master and doctor degree in your university. Thanks to him, I acknowledged more detail information about your university, and that strengthens my determination to go to your university especially with his encouragement and recommendation.
If I’m permitted luckily, I will study harder during my school life in Japan, obey the local law and live in harmony with my schoolmate.
I believe it will be unforgettable memories and make a importance change on me if I could be admitted to enter your university.
最后一段 an important change on me.打错了 ,希望大家帮我修改的更合适些而不是做翻译。。。 modern level是想表达日语达到了日语能力考试的二级水平。也就是中级水平
