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some people think that in urban areas,old buildings should be destroyed
and replaced with modern buildings. Others,however,argue that old buildings in
cities should be protected.Discuss both these viewss and give your own
opinion.
正文：In modern cities,old buildings are everywhere while new buildings are
built every day.Some peoplethink that old buildings should be replaced by modern
buildings,but othersthink that these buildings should be protected.
One of the main reasons for destroying old buildings is the dramatically
growing population in urban area.Most of old buildings are six floors high,by
comparison,the new buildings are twice as high as the olds.So the new buildings
can hold more people to live in.Another reason is that a large number of old
buildings are unsafe.The methods and materials they used to build the buildings
are not advanced.And the pipes and wire in the buildings are too old for people
to live.People must spend plenty of money to fix them for the frequent
damage.
On the other hand,however,some old biildings are gorgeous and very
difficult to copy,such as the Forbidden City.These buildings attract millions
of tourists to visit every year.It brings us a sense of national pride and
government can gain a huge amount of economic profits which coule be used to
support medical services and education.
In conclusion,although modern technology has brought us many remarkable
buildings,some old building are as precious as them.Therefore,the buildings of
historical importance and high artistic value should be protected.Other
buildings which are dangerous and may cause problems should be destroyed.

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