My favorite food is potatoes. Because they are delicious and cheap. I usually each other eat potatoes, so MOM and dad called me potatoes sister. Eat potatoes are my happy things. My potatoes but best eats and does not mind, is to let me eat potatoes for three meals a day, I'm tired of eating. There is a saying say: “The world is boundless, eat most" Different people like different food. Strange to tell, delicacies, delicious food, there are a lot of people love to eat, and I just like to eat potatoes.
这回对不对? I usually eat potatoes, so MOM and dad call me potatoes sister. I really enjoy eating potatoes. My dream is to eat potatoes for three meals a day. There is a saying say: “The world is boundless, eat most" Different people like different food. Strange to tell, delicacies, delicious food, there are a lot of people love to eat, and I just like to eat potatoes.
请各位帮小妹妹看看这篇英文日记有没有语法错误?有的请指出,谢谢!
“All of us had fun in Macau today”~~~这句话读起来实在是别扭 这样说应该比较好:What a wonderful day in Macau!~虽然这样说感觉稍微有点不适合前文的风格。。。有点做作。。。
谁帮我看看这篇英语作文有没有什么错误,谢谢,有错帮忙说下正确句子...
I know tomorrow is your birthday .I hope you will have a wonderful birthday .(Since tomorrow is your birthday ,I hope you will have a wonderful day.)(But去掉) I’m so sorry I can’t come (go)to your birthday party .Because(,because)I’m very busy (in )these days...
大家帮忙我看一看我写的这个英语作文,看看哪里需要多改一改更好,特别...
Maybe someday I will become a rich man.I will own a lot of wealth then I will do something I espect to do for a long time.First at all I will donate some money to poor family that let the child can go to school to learn,the old people can enjoy their life.Secondly,...
大家帮忙看看这篇文章有什么语法错误或用词不当
Too long!
紧急...帮我看看这篇文章有没有什么语法错误。谢谢~!
第一段, long time ago好些, 卧室里弄个秋千,这里用 to get a swing in my bedroom好些。后一句用happy比glad好些。第二段, On the National Day, 要加the; 最后一句不用倒装好些。第三段, The swing reminds me of my childhood.Of course,the time in my heart was soft and sweet....
...是明天比赛用的 大家帮忙看看有没有什么错误 谢谢 I dream of...
应该改为“我想成为一名英语老师,因为同学很喜欢从老师那里学习到英语知识,而且我也想要教更多人英语。”“因为我最喜欢的高中-贵阳一中,我想成为那里的一名学生在明年。”改为“因为我想成为那里的一名学生”,明年就不必要了,你可以用一般将来时来表达。“未来,我会周游世界,我会在我所去过的地方...
英语作文:大家帮我看下作文有没有什么语法问题,或者用词不恰当,谢了...
1.he has become one of the member 可以写成:he has been a member of our family 2.on vacation着重于度假中吧,感觉不大好,你可以这样写:when our family decieded to go to Rome for a vacation.或者你直接把后面的on vacation去掉也行,它和前面的have a trip 存在意义上的重复了(...
麻烦大家看看这段话,都那里错了。另外那些地方怎么改进改进。。。
没错,那是我的绰号。当然,你们也可以叫我旺财,因为我们是朋友了,对吗?”这样更有现场感和亲和力,你觉得呢?)I was born in Beijing and from a middle family.(英文对环境的表述习惯和汉语是相反的,应由小到大,所以改为“I was born in a middle-class family of Beijing”,“middle...
一篇英语小作文,麻烦请大家看看有没有语法错~~【高分!在线等】_百度知 ...
1. 给某人建议,不应该用offer,你可以直接用give呀 2. 前面说schoolwork,后面又是homework,感觉相当生硬,你可以换种说法 the workload in school,显得更活泼一点 3. said可以换成groused或者complained,会好些,哪怕用mentioned也可以哇。4. choise 应该是手误啦,但是即使这样,用choice也不太...
大家帮忙看看这篇作文可以打多少分(满分100分)需要修改的地方请提出来...
右边的看得不是很清楚。语法上没错误,单词也没拼错。结构是还不错。不过第一段有点孤立,建议和第二段连在一起。词汇比较简单,如果可以使用高级词汇会更好。所以我给你82分