求英语高手帮我检查一下有没有语法和拼写的错误

Question

With the pace of market economic system reform and the expansion of the global economic, the era of brand competition has arrived. The small and micro businesses in our country should not only face the increasingly fierce domestic competition, but also accept the challenges of the international market.. In the background of rapid economic development, brand has very important significance to the success of enterprise management. Brand advantage means a larger market.

Answer 1

With the ADVENT of market ECONOMY reform and the expansion of the global ECONOMY, the era of brand competition has arrived. (去掉the) Small and micro businesses in our country should not only face the increasingly fierce domestic competition, but also accept the challenges FROM the international market.. AGAINST THE BACKDROP of rapid economic development, brand has very important significance to the success of enterprise management. Brand advantage means a larger market.

我母语为英语

Answer 2

global economic改为global economy