英语作文 a visit in shanghai 要写3个上海是有名的地方 谢谢了

Answer 1

A visit to shanghai
With the development of Shanghai,we live more annd more comfortablely,we can buy all kinds of goods in Nanjing Road,we can relax ourselves in OrientalLand.but as the coin has two sides,there are also many problems in Shanghai ,but they are being solved.One or them is housing and another is traffic.
There are so many narrow roads in Shanghai,so we are often held up by in traffic jams.We must have the roads widened.The road which lay in our neiborhood was also a narrow one.It was widened one year ago and we moves our house to the suburb.We move into a new flat.The new flat is very big.There are also some paces for me to take up physical exercises.It doesn't matter that the new flat is far from the city center,because we can go there by subway.
Shanghai is developing very fast.As citizens,we must do all the things we can to support the development of Shanghai in order to live more comfortablely.

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可以短一点吗 我初一的 这个也太长了把

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我的English不好诶 你帮我把

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With the development of Shanghai,we live more annd more comfortablely,we can buy all kinds of goods in Nanjing Road,
There are so many narrow roads in Shanghai,so we are often held up by in traffic jams.It doesn't matter that the new flat is far from the city center,because we can go there by subway.
Shanghai is developing very fast.As citizens,we must do all the things we can to support the development of Shanghai in order to live more comfortablely.

Answer 2

好吧
这个The oriental pearl
东方明珠
Gold trading building
金茂大厦
The bund
外滩

Answer 3

Shanghai is a beautiful place.Such as:

Answer 4

不知道