研究生复试英文自我介绍求翻译

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尊敬的老师，早上好，我叫王宁，22岁，毕业于黑龙江中医药大学，我来自安徽。
我拥有一个四口之家，父母都是小学教师，还有一个哥哥，也即将大学毕业，和我一样在准备研究生复试。
我的本科专业是中药学。经过在学校四年的熏陶，我对中药学产生了很浓厚的兴趣。在西医西药更受欢迎的大环境下，我觉得坚持自己的兴趣比随波逐流更为重要。我喜欢中药学，同样喜欢生物，。我一直中药学要想发展的更好，就应该和更为先进的现代技术结合，所以选择了中药生物技术这个专业。之所以选择上海的学校，首先是因为我喜欢更为开放的城市，其次是因为上海离我家近一些，父母在，不远游。这是我离家四年明白的一件事。
我非常想来到贵校学习，希望各位老师给我这个机会。谢谢各位老师。
明天就要复试了，着急····
不要机器翻译的···一楼自重

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Good morning,my professors. my name is Wangning I'm 22. I graduated from traditional Chinese medicine University in heilongjiang. .

I have a family of four, parents is a primary school teacher, still have a brother, also is about to graduate from the university, the same as me in preparation for the graduate student. I major in college Chinese medicine. After four years in school influence, and I have a TCM strong interest. More popular in western medicine, western medicine of the environment, I think to stick to your own interest is more important than drift with the current. I like Chinese medicine, also like biological,. I have been to the better development of Chinese medicine, you should and more advanced modern technology in combination with, so choose the traditional Chinese medicine biotechnology this major. Was the choice of Shanghai school, first, because I like more open city, the second is Shanghai some near my home, and parents, don't travel. This is my home four years understand a thing.

I eagerly want to come to your school for further study, and I hope everybody interviewers will give me this opportunity. Thank you !
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基本都改过的，首尾段应该没问题吧，中间你自己在修改下。

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哎···也可以吧