请帮我用英语翻译一下我研究生复试的面试自我介绍，最好能生动点，不...

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请帮我用英语翻译一下我研究生复试的面试自我介绍，最好能生动点，不要太多晦涩的词，不要有低级的语法错误，这个真的对我很重要，谢谢。
早上好，亲爱的教授们，很荣幸能来到这里参加你们组织的面试。首先，我想向大家做个简要的自我介绍。我叫文章，今年22岁。来自新疆昌吉市。我即将于今年6月底毕业于xx大学，我的专业是通信工程。我真心希望能够获得在母校继续学习完成我得研究生学业的机会，同时这也是我一直以来的梦想。我对自己有充足的信心，因为生活中我就是一个乐观活泼，喜欢动手实践，做事认真的人。大学四年，我有三年担任班长，组织管理能力得到了很大锻炼。通过了四六级考试，还是一名党员，虽然我的初试成绩不是名列前茅，但是我一直认为一次考试并不能全面反映一个人的综合素质，大学期间，我一直比较注重个人综合能力的培养，我将课余的大部分时间，都用在了自己的爱好上，篮球，吉他，摄影等，同时我也觉得通过这些爱好我学到了很多书本上没有的东西，使自己的综合素质得到较大提高，让我拥有了较好的身体素质，审美观和乐观的心态。本科阶段我没有拿到很多竞赛奖项。但是作为一名党员骨干，我获得过优秀班干部，所带班级荣获优秀班集体，本人也多次获得院嘉奖，经过一个月的实习之后，感到自己的专业知识还是很欠缺，让我更加坚定的继续学习深造的决心，希望教员们能给我一个表现自己，提高自己的机会，我会用实际行动证明自己。
that,s all.thank you for your time
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Answer 1

Good morning, my dear professors, is an honor to be here to participate in your organization's interview. First of all, I would like to make a brief self introduction. I call this, this year 22 years old. From Xinjiang to Changji city. I will be at the end of year 6graduated from XX University, my major is communication engineering. I really hope to get the alma mater to study my postgraduate academic opportunities, and this is always my dream. I have enough confidence, because I live in is an optimistic and lively, like hands-on practice, work conscientiously. The university four years, I have three years as monitor, organization and management ability to get a lot of exercise. Through the band four six examination, or a member of the party, although my preliminary examination achievement not come out in front, but I always think that a test does not reflect a person's overall quality, university period, I have been paying more attention to personal comprehensive ability, I will spare the most of the time, in his hobbies, basketball, guitar, photography, and I also think through these hobbies, I have learned a lot of books no thing, make their own comprehensive quality has been improved greatly, let me have good physical quality, aesthetic and optimistic attitude. I didn't get a lot of undergraduate contest awards. But as a party member backbone, I earned the outstanding class cadre, the class was awarded outstanding class collective, I have repeatedly won the Academy Awards, after one month internship, feel their professional knowledge is very short, let me more determined to continue with his studies determination, hope that teachers can give me one a show themselves, improve their chances, I will use practical actions to prove myself.

Answer 2

Good morning, dear professors, very honored to be here to participate in your organization's interview. First of all, I want to do a brief introduce myself. My name is articles, 22. ChangJiShi from xinjiang. I will be at the end of June this year graduated from xx university, my major is communication engineering. I sincerely hope to achieve in continue to learn to complete my Alma mater to graduate school opportunities, but this is I had always dreamed of. I have enough confidence, because in my life is an optimistic and lively, likes to work practice, work conscientiously. The university for four years, I have three years as a monitor, management ability to get a lot of exercise. Through the four six level of test, or a communist party member, although my first try achievement is not is among the best, but I've always thought a test and can't reflect a person's comprehensive quality, university, I have been relatively pay attention to individual cultivate comprehensive ability, I will spare the most of the time, with his hobby, basketball, guitar, photography and so on, at the same time I also think through these hobbies I learned many books no things, make oneself of the comprehensive quality and get increased greatly, let me have a good body quality and aesthetic view and optimistic attitude. Undergraduate stage I didn't get a lot of competition awards. But as a party backbone, I won the outstanding class cadre, with class awarded the excellent class, oneself also won several awards court, after a month after the internship, feel their professional knowledge is short of, let me more firm to pursue advanced studies determination, hope the teachers can give me a performance to enhance their own chance, I'll proved himself.

Answer 3

Good morning, my dear professors, is an honor to be here to participate in your organization's interview. First of all, I would like to make a brief self introduction. I call this, this year 22 years old. From Xinjiang to Changji city. I will be at the end of year 6graduated from XX University, my major is communication engineering. I really hope to get the alma mater to study my postgraduate academic opportunities, and this is always my dream. I have enough confidence, because I live in is an optimistic and lively, like hands-on practice, work conscientiously. The university four years, I have three years as monitor, organization and management ability to get a lot of exercise. Through the band four six examination, or a member of the party, although my preliminary examination achievement not come out in front, but I always think that a test does not reflect a person's overall quality, university period, I have been paying more attention to personal comprehensive ability, I will spare the most of the time, in his hobbies, basketball, guitar, photography, and I also think through these hobbies, I have learned a lot of books no thing, make their own comprehensive quality has been improved greatly, let me have good physical quality, aesthetic and optimistic attitude. I didn't get a lot of undergraduate contest awards. But as a party member backbone, I earned the outstanding class cadre, the class was awarded outstanding class collective, I have repeatedly won the Academy Awards, after one month internship, feel their professional knowledge is very short, let me more determined to continue with his studies determination, hope that teachers can give me one a show themselves, improve their chances, I will use practical actions to prove myself.
that,s all.thank you for your time

Answer 4

你的自我介绍太多了，有些问题可以留在后面提问的，简单明了即可