求一篇英语短文，，高分！！！

Question

Write a composition entitled why I chose to Attend College. The following points may serve as a framework.
1. Your decision to go to college
2. Main reasons for choosing to go to college
a. burning thirst for more knowledge and keen interest in learning
b. opportunities a college education may provide for all-round development
c. a necessary step to a good career
You may begin like this:
As my high school years were drawing to a close, I turned over and over again in my mind the question of whether I should go to college…
为什么选择读大学

一． 你决定去上大学
二． 选择上大学的主要原因
1. 渴望获取更多的知识和浓厚学习兴趣
2. 大学教育可以提供全面发展的机会
3. 能找个好工作

你可以像这样开始：我的中学生涯即将结束，我在脑海里翻来覆去的想，我是否应该去上大学
要求自己写，，不要网络复制，，，满意者加分~~~~200字左右

Answer 1

When I will graduate from high school, I'm always thingking over if I go to college. For many reasons,now I have decided to attend college.The main reasons why I want to college lie in the following.
Above all, when I graduate from high school, I don't have enough social experience and knowledge. The knowledge we owned from high school does not meet the need of modern society. Burning thirst for more knowledge and for getting more experience , I must go to a higher plat for a further study to increase both general and specific knowledge. Moreover,
at college I can be free to explore a variety of interests and develop my keen and best interest. Let my interest shine in my life.
Second, it is a good opportunity for me to receive the college educatoin and to seek comprehensive development . A practical education is very important. A practical education contributes to practical skills. The colleges can provide us with so opportunities. Having received the college educatoin, I developed my skills and mastered them and can make use of them in reality.
Finally , to get an excellent job, I must go to college. With the boom of economy, I find it so difficult to get a job for the ones who do not attend college. With the high rate of employment, it is high time that we went to college to improve ourselves.
In a word , I want to choose to attend college .
原汁原味的，独创，处女版。希望能得到你的满意。