高中英语问题，急！

Question

各位中午好！我叫李小鹰。

首先感谢张沙先生和政府邀请我来参观这个公园和演讲。

感谢游客，特别是地震的生还者，还有那些努力救援生还者的人到来。他们挖出被困者，掩埋死者。从煤矿里救出一万多煤矿工人。还为家园被毁的幸存者建起了避难所，火车、卡车和飞机运来新鲜的水。感谢那些努力建造新城市的人，他们使一个废墟又变成生气勃勃的城市。我对这个以“中国勇敢之城”著称的城市充满敬意，这里的人们不怕困难，在逆境中奋发图强。你们应该以生活在这个城市为荣！

最后，再次感谢游客们听我的演说，祝大家生活愉快！

Afternoon everybody! My name is Li Xiao Ying.

First thank you very much Mr Zhang Sha and the
city government for inviting me to visit the park and speak.

Thank you very much the visitors, especially the survivors of the
quake, and those who worked hard
to save survivors come
to here. They dig out those who
were trapped and to bury the dead. Most of the 10, 000 miners were rescued from
the coal mines. they built shelters for survivors whose homes had been
destroyed. Fresh water was taken to the city by train, truck and plane.

请问我英语翻译得对吗？还有，“感谢那些努力建造新城市的人，他们使一个废墟又变成生气勃勃的城市。我对这个以“中国勇敢之城”著称的城市充满敬意，这里的人们不怕困难，在逆境中奋发图强。你们应该以生活在这个城市为荣！

最后，再次感谢游客们听我的演说，祝大家生活愉快！”我不会翻译。

Answer 1

“感谢那些努力建造新城市的人，他们使一个废墟又变成生气勃勃的城市。我对这个以“中国勇敢之城”著称的城市充满敬意，这里的人们不怕困难，在逆境中奋发图强。你们应该以生活在这个城市为荣！

"Thanks for those trying to build new cities, they make a ruin and become avibrant cities. I pay homage to the known as the "city" of the brave Chinese city,the people here are not afraid of difficulties, work hard in the face of adversity.You should be proud to live in this city!

你翻译的不错啊。加油！！！

Answer 2

你这是添油加醋，英文原稿没有的意思，你用自己的话补充起来了！我个人感觉你自己的话比英文原稿更富有感染力 呵呵

追问

我是中文翻译成英语啊！

追答

我是说怎么那么中式，谢谢某人，不是thank you very much Mr Zhang Sha 而是thanks Mr Zhang Sha very much !