高手来看看我习思五级考试的作文。我是初一的（老师让我报五级(┬＿┬)），所以作文肯定是漏洞百出。

Question

题目：假设明天是植树节（Tree Planting Day），老师将带领同学们去北山植树。现在，请你代表老师写一则通知，告诉全班同学相关的具体信息。
活动时间：早晨7点至下午4点。
活动地点：北山。
集合地点及其他：学校门口，集体乘车，不要迟到。
活动要求①请同学们穿运动鞋，方便爬山；②需要大家自己准备午餐和饮料；③植树过程中，大家一定要互相帮助，完成任务。
书面表达注意：①通知的开头已给出，但不计入总次数；②词数：80左右。
以下是我的作文：
Notice
Fellow students,
Tomorow is Tree Planting Day.（以上为给出的开头，貌似这个tomorow错了- -试卷错误，不关我事。下面是我写的了。）I will take you to Beishan to plant the trees. The action（我不知道“活动”的名词形式是不是这个- -） is from 7:00 a.m. to 4:00 p.m.. We will gather at the school gate and we will go to there by bus together. Please don't be late. All of you should be wearing sports shoes（不知道运动鞋是不是这样写的，我们老师说sports作定语是“运动的”的意思）. It is easy to climb the mountain（easy句型是不是easy to do sth.？）. And everyone must get the lunch food and the drinks for yourself（for后面可以用反身代词么？）. During planting tree, we should help each other to finish it.
That is all of this notice. Please remember it（总感觉“请记住它”不是这样翻译的。）.
Your teacher
高手们最好帮我改改错，让我长进长进。
还可以自己写一篇范文给我。谢谢啦。

Answer 1

加油加油。

Tomorrow is Tree Planting Day.we plan to plant trees in Beishan.
The activity will be start at 7 o'clock and finish at 4 o'colck.
We will gather at the school gate and get there by bus.Don't be late.All of you should be wearing sports shoes(sneakers).It will help to climb the mountain.And you should(must太强硬）prepare the lunch(直接lunch 就是午饭了）and drinks for yourself.(并不是指for后面一定接反身代词，看句意）During planting tree, you'd better help each other to finish it.
That is all . Please remember it

Answer 2

Fellow students,
Tomorrow is Tree Planting Day. So I decide to take you all to Bei hill tomottow to plant some trees and we will start off at 7:00 a.m. at the school gate .Please don't be late and take your lunch and some water with you for we will stay there until 4.p.m.And sports shoes will be needed for the long-walking and hard climbing.When you're there , please bear in mind to help each other finish your work.
Above is all about the notice and don't forget it.