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Question

为甚么在前面我说这也在一定程度上影响了我的人生观呢，因为我想到了我生活中有过的一些“小事情”，我也相信每个人都可以讲出一个对自己重要的“小事情”，其实我就经常纠结于这样的一些小事情：如果我晚出门十分钟，今天会不一样吗？如果我没赶上这趟地铁，我又会遇到什么事呢？如果我没有看过这部影片，我的人生观又会有什么改变吗？如果我没有无意中打开那个网友的影评，我的论文题目会不同吗？如果我最后没有交这篇论文，或者迟交了这篇论文，我的成绩又会是怎样呢，会不会就直接给挂掉了？
Why do I say this in front of a certain extent, it affected my outlook on life, because I thought my life had some "little things", I also believe that everyone can speak their important a "little things", in fact I often struggle with the small things like: If I go ten minutes late, and today will be different? I did not catch this tour if the subway, I would encounter anything at all? If I have not seen the film, what have my life change? If I do not inadvertently open the users of the critics, my thesis topic will be different? If I did not pay the final paper or a paper late, what I would do the results will not directly to hang?
当然生命中是没有这么多如果的，世界上也没有后悔药卖，我们能做的也只能是做好自己生命中的每一件小事，礼貌对待我们身边的每一个人，节约时间，因为那就是善待我们自己的生命；努力工作，因为那会给我们带来我们想要的生活。
Of course life is not so much if the world did not regret selling drugs, we could all do a good job of their own life every little thing, courteous to everyone around us, to save time because it is to treat our own lives; hard work, because that will give us the life we want.

Answer 1

问题确实蛮多的，动词用法，时态，以及中国式英语都存在，不过汉语写的不错。

Answer 2

我是一只菜鸟，以下是我的建议，您有空，且感兴趣的话，可以闲看一下：why did it what i said before ,to some extent ,had inflluence on the outlook of my life ?......i believe that everyone had his/her important little things,too. in fact ,i often struggle with this littlel things ，for instence，。。。。。。时间关系，下次补全！愿有道之人共同学习，共同进步！

Answer 3

i also believed
还有怎么都是逗号啊 这也有关系的
带来我们想要的生活 that will bring the live what we want to us

Answer 4

我是一只菜鸟，以下是我的建议，您有空，且感兴趣的话，可以闲看一下时间关系，下次补全！愿有道之人共同学习，共同进步！