一篇英文作文，题目 life in the future 帮忙找下错

Question

Life in the future
In the near future,people’s life will have big changes as well as people’s basic necessities of life.

Life in the future. Many thing will be change like transportation shopping , health and medicine education and knowledge.

transportation will be coming cleaner, faster and safer. New technology is being used to make sure that the cars, taxis, buses and trains we use do not pollute the air. And there will be pilotless automobile which can help us get to the destination safely and quicly which doesn't need us control.

E-commerce,or business done on the Internet,is becoming more and more popular as people discover the advantages of online shopping.The Internet also makes it easier for companies to keep in touch with customers and companies in other countries.shopping mall is not necessary.

In the future, people will live longer. We will be able to enjoy a longer and healthier life and remain active even in old age. People now are paying more attention to the importance of a healthy diet and an active life. In the near future ,scientists and physicians will be able to cure more diseases like cancer.

For education,distance education will help people study whenever they have time and whereever they may be.The way we view learning and knowledge is also changing.Instead of being students only when we are young,we will becoming lifelong learners.

We cant’t be sure whether our fancy will come ture, but one thing we can sure is that in the future our life will become more and more covenient

Answer 1

Many thing will be change like transportation shopping , health and medicine education and knowledge.
应该改为many things will be changed like transportation shopping ,health ,medicine education and knowledge .
第三段开头字母要大写，Transportantion will becoming ...
we use do not pollute the air 改为we use will not pollute the air
People now are paying more attention ，attention 加s
whereever 改为wherever
covenient改为convenient

追问

谢谢亲，找的很仔细呢！！！pay attention 要加s么？我找到的都是attention没复数啊？

追答

Sorry,我错了，pay more attention 是对的， 嘿嘿