哪位大哥大姐帮忙写篇英文自我介绍,谢谢

个人英语不是很好,现在还再准备,稿子一直弄不出来,所以想请大家帮帮忙,免得到时候被人家鄙视,能有个一分半钟差不多了,谢谢了

计算机系,软件开发,一年工作...

It's a pleasure to meet you all --> It's my pleasure
I'm qualified for this interview. Qualified 不是这样用的
(A qualified doctor)
简单的一句 I'am grateful(表示感谢) to be chosen for this interview 就可以了
I am graduate from shanghai donghui vocational and technical school. Graduate 已是动词. --> I graduated from...(最好加上年份, 如last year, in 2006等)
major--> majored 表示过去式
"Is reading the technical college, studies is the business management specialty?" 不明白...我猜你是想说
--> I specialized in business management. 我专攻商业管理
I once worked in the transport agent company as the merchandiser. Once 可以省略, 我反而认为如能说出这职业为你带来了什么好处会重要些, 即你在处事方面有何改善, 学懂了什么技能, 知识, 沟通技巧, 这些会对你要应徵的这份工作有什么好处, 而令主持面试者觉得你有能力胜任这工作
--> Having worked in a transportation agency, (用a, 因之前没有提过是哪一公司, 用agency, 已代表了这机抅, 用transportation, 因我看到外国的都是这么叫) I have learnt to cooperate with (合作) one another, I have improved my communication skills which will help me work efficiently. (有效率地)
adaptive capacity is strong --> my adaptive capacity is high
"it is serious to work?" 不明白...还是你是想说这对工作很重要?
--> These qualities (素质) are very important.
my hobby is at writting,reading,singing and traveling.--> My hobbies are writing, reading, singing and traveling.
或地道些 --> Writing, reading, singing and traveling are my favorites (所爱好的). I enjoy them very much.
I am very interested in this position 这句感觉怪怪的...英文来说只是表现出你对这工作感兴趣
--> I really would like to be a/an___(工作名称), which can certainly(肯定) provide me with more chances and challenges (chances 和 challenges 都是可以数的, 而整句都能让人感到你的热诚)
thanks all of you for giving this chance for stating my wishes (这句只是犯了文法上的错误)
--> Thanks to all of you for giving me this chance to state my wishes. (this chance to deliver my speech 可能会好些)
或--> Thank you all for...
I do wish that I can become a qualified staff in the position I applied for. Qualified 后面通常会用doctor, teacher这些专业, 很少用staff这泛称
--> I do hope(hope较wish来得实际) that I can become a qualified___(一种专业) in the future. Should I be fortunate enough to be chosen for this position, (意指如果我能庆幸地被你们选中任这职位)I will fully(完全地) apply my skills in my work and get the job well done.(做好这份工)
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