我去年写的一篇英语作文，三百词，我的校园生活，词汇过于简单，想改成高中毕业水平，有谁说能够的。回复
我去年写的一篇英语作文，三百词，我的校园生活，词汇过于简单，想改成高中毕业水平，有谁说能够的。回复我
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When I was 6 years old, I started my primary school life. At
school I learn a lot from teachers. And I learn knowledge from my
textbooks. I learn to be good student at school and good child at home. I
have made great progress in my school life. My school life is nice and
happy. The primary school life is coming to an end, but I'll remember it
forever.Our campus is peaceful in the morning.In a while, students come to school, most of them walk to school,some ride on bicycle and a few by car. The campus liveliness now.
Look,a few junior students clean the path of lawn. The reading begins at 7 o'clock,in corridor and classroom, students all read their books serious in teacher's tutorship. After second class,it's time for morning exercise.Every class all line orderly in playground,they start exercise in the music. Nine-class students also start their long-distance running exercise on the raceway,look,how they bouncy!
But it's different for break exercise time on Thursday, the school hold "Sunshine English" activity usually at that time Because our school is good at English.Students all very happy when this time come, they listen the host explanation in fluent English in the English music one playground, then they begin active communicate each other, some of them will be invite to singing or dancing, smile appears everyone's face. "Sunshine English" make us learn more in the laugh, improve our ability and make our campus life become rich and colorful.
I like our campus and like our campus life more.
school I learn a lot from teachers. And I learn knowledge from my
textbooks. I learn to be good student at school and good child at home. I
have made great progress in my school life. My school life is nice and
happy. The primary school life is coming to an end, but I'll remember it
forever.Our campus is peaceful in the morning.In a while, students come to school, most of them walk to school,some ride on bicycle and a few by car. The campus liveliness now.
Look,a few junior students clean the path of lawn. The reading begins at 7 o'clock,in corridor and classroom, students all read their books serious in teacher's tutorship. After second class,it's time for morning exercise.Every class all line orderly in playground,they start exercise in the music. Nine-class students also start their long-distance running exercise on the raceway,look,how they bouncy!
But it's different for break exercise time on Thursday, the school hold "Sunshine English" activity usually at that time Because our school is good at English.Students all very happy when this time come, they listen the host explanation in fluent English in the English music one playground, then they begin active communicate each other, some of them will be invite to singing or dancing, smile appears everyone's face. "Sunshine English" make us learn more in the laugh, improve our ability and make our campus life become rich and colorful.
I like our campus and like our campus life more.
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