急求:研究生复试自我介绍翻译!来英语达人!

在这里先谢谢各位对我问题的关注。马上就复试,可恨自己英语比较烂,初试分比较一般,就很想复试能表现好点,自我介绍是第一关,所以在这求达人帮忙翻译啊!!!谢谢了!
这下面是汉文,能不能再帮忙看看写的咋样,有没需要修改和增加的地方?是否字数少了呢?希望能按英文的习惯翻译,不胜感激!

尊敬的各位老师,早上好!首先感谢各位老师给我这次面试的机会。
我叫XX,24岁,来自安徽省中部风景优美的黄山脚下。我于X年7月从XX大学经济与管理学院毕业,取得了管理学学士学位。在大学的四年中我努力学习,较好的完成了各项学习任务。曾获得特等奖学金,通过了英语六级。大学毕业后,即进入XX集团公司技术研发部工作。在工作一年后,我深感所学知识的贫乏,同时对金融知识的兴趣越来越浓厚。因此,我决定辞职报考ZZ大学金融专业的研究生。
我是一个自信、乐观和勤奋的学生,或者我不够聪明,但我会很努力一旦确立目标就会坚持不懈。如果我能得到在ZZ大学金融专业读研学习的机会,我一定倍加珍惜,虚心求学,全身心的投入到该领域的学习和探索中去,不辜负学校和老师们的关怀培养,竭尽所能回报家乡,回报社会。
恳请各位老师能给我这次机会!谢谢!
虽然我英文不是很好,但请不要拿在线翻译的东西稍微修改一下来啊,这个我还是看的出来的。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。为什么都拿这么一点不通的东西来凑数啊。。。。。。。。。。

Dear teachers, good morning! First, thanks for your teacher to give me this opportunity.
My name is XX, 24 years old, from beautiful huangshan central anhui province feet. I in July to X from XX university of economy and management graduate, obtained a bachelor's degree in management. The four years in college I study hard, good has completed the study task. Won pl scholarship, passed cet6. After graduation from the university, namely into the XX group company r&d department work. At work, I deeply feel after a year, and the knowledge of the lack of interest in more and more strong financial knowledge. Therefore, I decided to resign to enter oneself for an examination the graduate student financial professional ZZ university.
I am a confident, optimistic and diligent student, or I'm smart enough, but I will be very hard once establish targets will persist. If I can get a financial professional ZZ university in grind the opportunity to learn, I must cherishing and modest, make a commitment to study in this field in the study and exploration, never let the school and the teachers care training, exhaustability homeplace, and social returns.
Solicited fellow teachers can give me this opportunity! Thank you!

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第1个回答  2011-04-04
I have never had a job before ,but I can assure you that I am very excited about this opportunity .Thank you .Well ,I don't have any references before ,but I think that (where) would be a wonderful place to continue my study!这是最地道的英语求职哦,是我在看美剧的时候记下的,我也是黄山的 不知道你是不是也是黄山学院的 虽然内容不多 但句句精辟本回答被提问者采纳
第2个回答  2011-04-05
Dear teachers, good morning! thank you teacher gave me the opportunity to interview. My name is XX,24 years old, from the Central foot of the beautiful scenery of Huangshan, Anhui Province. I in x year in July from XX University Graduate School of Economics and management, obtained a Bachelor's degree in management science. In college I studied hard in four years, had better complete the learning task. Won the Grand Prize winner of Golden, adopted the CET. After graduation, entered the XX technical research and Development Department. After a year of work, I am the knowledge to poor, at the same time on the growing interest of financial knowledge. Therefore, I decided to quit applied for ZZ finance graduate of the University. I am a confident, optimistic and diligent student, or I'm not clever enough, but I will be very hard once to target will persist. If I can get in the ZZ financial professional opportunities for graduate study at the University, I will cherish, learn study, heart into in the field of learning and exploration, and live up to the school and the teachers caring culture, do their utmost to return home, repay the society. Urge teachers to give me this opportunity! thank you!
第3个回答  2011-04-05
Dear teacher, good morning! Thank you teachers for giving me this interview.
My name is XX, 24 years old, from Anhui Province, Huangshan scenic central foot. My X-XX in July from the University of Economics and Management, graduated with a Bachelor of Management. Four years in college I worked hard to learn, the better the learning task completed. Principal was awarded a scholarship by the English six. After graduation, the technology research and development into the XX group department. After one year of work, I am the knowledge of the poor, while increasing interest in financial knowledge. Therefore, I decided to resign apply for financial professionals ZZ University graduate.
I am a confident, optimistic and diligent student, or I'm not smart, but I will try once established goals will be persistent. If I can get financial professionals in the ZZ University graduate learning opportunities, I will cherish, with an open mind to study, to dedicate myself to the field of learning and exploration to live up to the care of schools and teachers training, every effort return home, return to the community.
Teachers ask you to give me this opportunity! Thank you!
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