急！！求英文自我简介一份 追加最高分！！！

Question

我学的是国际贸易专业，最近在找工作，接到一个面试电话，我估计会要求我用英语做下简短的自我介绍。我英语不是很好，特来求高人指点一二。

我叫XXX，即将从XX大学毕业，我的专业是国际经济与贸易。我来自江西省九江市，一个和无锡一样美丽的城市（我在读的大学在无锡），庐山就在那。如果有机会我很乐意做你的导游。
在读期间，我很注重社会实践，利用课余时间做过很多兼职。就像我简历写的，做过很多次家教，做过促销员，做过（无锡一个风景区的）服务人员。给我印象最深的却是我找家教的经历。快放暑假的时候，利用星期六星期日，准备好要用的东西，去到无锡新华书店门口，站在门口，手里拿着写有“家教”字样的标示牌，等待“顾客”。“顾客”并不好找，常常一位家长周围围着6、7个人。竞争的真实性和残酷性比我今天找工作尤甚。 通常我非常幸运，总能找到适合我的“工作”。
接下来说说我的爱好可以吗？我很喜欢看书，对中国古文尤甚。我喜欢古文中那些可意会不可言传的诗词，喜欢它们优美精炼的词句。最爱的莫过于《红楼梦》了。我也喜欢英文小说，体会不同国别不同文化背景下的人们的生活。像 雾都孤儿（Olifer Twist） 远离尘嚣（far from the madding cround)等。 That's all.Thank you.

喔~~好长啊，而且和模版有些出入。得靠高手自己翻译了。您翻译的时候可以酌情考虑增减。有些不好翻译的词句可以用您自己的话说，比如可意会不可言传等，或者直接跳过不翻。当然前提是整体要保持好。
这份简历很急，明天就要用到呢。请大侠不佞赐教。回答最好的追加100分。

Answer 1

楼上的是机翻译的吧.
my name is XXX I will graduate from XX university , my major is international economy and trade. I come from Jiujiang , Jiangxi Province, which is the beautiful city as Wuxi .And I study in the university in Wuxi.If I have the chance I will be gald to show you around my hometown.
At school, I attach great importance to social practice, doing lots of part-time jobs. I liked writing biographical notes, and had done a promoter, and had done (a scenic Wuxi) servicer . What impressed me the most is I find a tutor experience. When summer holidays coming, I perpared the using things on Saturday and Sunday, , then went to the Xinhua Bookstore in Wuxi door.I standed at the entrance. hand was written "tutor" indication at all times, waiting for "customers." But "Customers" are not easy to find, often surrounded by a parent around six, seven tutors. Luckly, I can find suitable "job."
Next, I would like to talk about my hoddies.I like reading, especially the Chinese symbols. I like those symbols can realize unspeakable poetry, like refining their beautiful words. Favorite is the "A Dream of Red Mansions." on the other hand I like English fiction, experience different country with different cultural backgrounds of people's lives. Such as Oliver Twist (Olifer Twist) away from the hubbub of the city (far from the madding cround).
That's all.Thank you.
翻译的有点匆忙,有细节之处自己改改.

Answer 2

I called XXX, XX forthcoming from the university graduates, professionals in the international economy and trade. I come from the city of Jiujiang in Jiangxi Province, and Wuxi in a city as beautiful (in the university in Wuxi), Lushan is out there. If I have the chance I will be happy to do your tour guides. In reading, I attach great importance to social practice, the use of after-school time made a lot of part-time jobs. I like writing biographical notes, and has done many times tutor, and has done a promoter, and has done (a scenic Wuxi) service personnel. What impressed me the most is I find a tutor experience. Express the summer, on Saturdays Sunday, ready to use things, to the Xinhua Bookstore in Wuxi door at the entrance. hand was written, "tutor" indication at all times, waiting for "customers." "Customers" and not easy to find, often surrounded by a parent around six, seven individuals. Competition in the authenticity and brutality than I to find a job today is even worse. Normally, I very lucky, we can find suitable my "work." Next, I love to talk about it? I like to read, especially the Chinese symbols. I like those symbols can realize unspeakable poetry, like refining their beautiful words. Favorite is the "A Dream of Red Mansions." I like English fiction, experience different country with different cultural backgrounds of people's lives. Like Oliver Twist (Olifer Twist) away from the hubbub of the city (far from the madding cround). That's all.Thank you.