帮我改一下小升初面试英语自我介绍。急！

Question

Hello everyone ,My name is XX english name is fammy,I'm 13years old.I'm studying in SuYuan Primary School .
I have many hobbies,such as :playing the piano, drawing,swimming and so on .
I 希望能够来这所XX学校，我非常喜欢这所学校。谢谢

后面不会用英文了，帮忙翻译一下后面的一些，再帮我修改一下全部。最好再帮我加一些，这太少了。哪位大侠能帮帮我呀，我明天就要面试啦！！！！3Q 3Q 3Q 3Q 3Q 3Q 3Q 3Q 3Q 3Q 3Q 3Q 3Q 3Q 3Q 3Q 3Q

Answer 1

Hello everyone ,My name is XX and my english name is fammy,I'm 13 years old.The school I studied in was SuYan Primary School.I have many interests.I like playing the piano,and I am interested in drawing ,besides ,I am also good at swimming.
I hope I can have a colourful live in middle school,to pursue my study and develope myself, I think if I can study in your school ,I will have a better future.So I will have more confidence to study hard.
It's my honor if I can study in your school,and I hope it can come true ,thanks a lot!

Answer 2

Hello,everyone.I am so glad to stand here.First of all,I will introduce myself.My name is...,I am...years old this year.I have many hobbies,such as:reading.dancing.writing and so on.Also I like English very much.I think English is very useful for us,because many many people in the world can speak English,if I learn it well,I can talk with them and make friends with them.Besides these,I also like doing some exercises.Doing exercises can make us healthier.Health is so important for us,we can not doing anything without a good health. I also like help others,when you are in trouble,I will do anything that I can.Of course,I hope you my classmates can help me too.At the last,I wish we can become good friends and everybody can get a good result at the end.Thank you!

Answer 3

Instructor（教官），my name is……my last name（姓）is……my firstname （名)is………I am ……years old……I am from ……middle school ……I like……my fauvite（sport、color……）is……………………记住，面试地上有垃圾，一定要捡起来，并扔进垃圾桶，不要抛，轻轻地放；……给伱水，一定要喝一口，之后走之前带走……大方一点，不要语无伦次，面带微笑进去，之后出去最好鞠个躬，做些手势！☄☄☄☄☄☄☄☄☄☄☄☄☄☄☄☄☄☄☄☄☄☄☄☄☄☄☄加油！

Answer 4

我也是明天面试，你考哪个学校？
我准备了英语自我介绍，希望你能把我回答当成最佳答案
I 希望能够来这所XX学校，我非常喜欢这所学校。谢谢
I want to come to xxx school,I like this school very much
Thank you

Answer 5

你把原文发过来吧