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Last summer vacation,my family and I went to Qingdao by train.There was always sunshine and fresh air,which made us so fortable.We went to the seaside,the sea was as blue as the sky,and bathing in the sunshine on the beach, was really an enjoyable thing.
去年暑假,我和家人坐火车去了青岛,那里总是阳光明媚,空气清新,这让我们很惬意,我们去了海边,海和天一样蓝,在沙滩上沐浴阳光,真是一件愉快的事情。
I also picked up a lot of colorful shells with my little sister.There we bought many interesting souvenirs,I was planing to send them to my friends.
我还和妹妹一起捡到了很多五颜六色的贝壳,在那里我们买了很多有趣的纪念品,我正打算把它们送给我的朋友们。
.We ate many tings there,such as fish,prawn,and so on.They are very delicious.Then we lived in a clean and tidy hotel,and the price was not so expensive.
我们在那里吃了很多东西,如鱼、虾等,它们非常美味。然后我们住在一个干净整洁的旅馆里,价格也不贵。
I like Qingdao very much,and if I got a chance,I hope to e here again,it is such a beautiful and interesting place.
我非常喜欢青岛,如果有机会,我希望能再次来到这里,这是一个如此美丽有趣的地方。
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