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Question

What is a friend?
A friend is someone that who trust you. The friendship between the people is establishes depending on each other trust. Two most intimate friends are trust each other. Friendships are relaxed, loyal relationships that involve intimacy. Many studies have shown the benefits of friendship on positive social, emotional, and physical well-being. Friends are as important as families. In our society, many people turn to their friends first when they encounter crisis because of the distance of their family. People without friends are likely to feel isolated and lonely. If you don't have a friend, take the initiative to be a friend to someone else. For instance, join social clubs, civic groups, volunteer organizations, community events, church activities, etc. These are good places to meet people and build a good relationship. When you attend a group, have something to say. Be informed by reading news, magazines, and books and find opportunities to speak to other people without waiting for them to do it. It is also very important to listen to what the person is saying to you. Remember, if you want to have a friend, you must be a friend.

Answer 1

第一句 把who去掉
第二行 established拼写错误吧
觉得怪怪的，你是想表达建立在信任之上吧？不妨说be established by each others' trust.
第二行最后一个are去掉
friendships用不着加s，所以后面用is
第N行的are likely to feel不图直接就用possibly feel

Answer 2

没有错啊~~

Answer 3

A friend is someone who trusts you.

Answer 4

鬼知道没有错啊