论文摘要英文翻译求助

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我正在写毕业论文,要写英文摘要,就是把中文摘要翻译成英文,因为我英文不太好.自己已翻译一次,希望高手能帮我再翻译一下,我对比一下,想改得正确率高些,谢谢大家.

中文摘要如下:
大学生就业问题一直以来就是社会上关注的焦点问题，本文将分别从大学生、用人单位和其它专家的角度综合阐述、分析目前大学生就业形势，并且针对当前的就业形势提出一些有用的观点和看法。通过对本次特别设计的大学毕业生就业问题问卷调查表的分析，提取出有用的数据，利用层次分析法，为大学毕业生的择业问题提供一种科学、合理的决策模型，并且通过案例说明此模型的使用方法，从而为当前大学毕业生在解决择业问题时提供一种简单、合理的解决途径。

翻译如下,高手麻烦帮我修改一下,谢谢!!
Since the university student has gotten employed the question always is the focal point question which in the society will pay attention, this article separately from the university student, the employer and other experts' angle synthesis elaborations, the analysis at present the university student gets employed the situation, and will propose some useful viewpoints and the view in view of the current employment situation. Through the university graduate which specially designs to this gets employed the question questionnaire survey table analysis, withdraws the useful data, the use level analytic method, provides one science, the reasonable policy-making model for the university graduate's choosing profession question, and explains this model through the case the application method, thus for current university graduates when solution choosing profession question simply provides one kind, the reasonable key to the situation.

如果我翻译的问题太多可以重要帮我翻译,谢谢啦`~~一定要帮偶呀~~

Answer 1

层次分析法：AHP：Analytical Hierarchy Process

问题：有些地方省略为好。problem在这篇摘要里面不该出现。要用这只能用issue。还有“使用”一词的翻译，这儿用application最合适。

科学、合理；汉语可以这么说，译成英语则不太好。Scientific的东西肯定是rational（或者reasonable）的。但很多科学的东西不一定切实可行。我把译文处理成了scientific and practical,不知道你是否赞同。

简单：译成easy过于口语化，象样的论文是不会使用这样的词汇的。

College graduates’ employment has long being the focus of public concern. This paper aims to outline and analyze current college graduates’ employment situation and proposes some practical suggestions and viewpoints from the perspective of college graduates, employers, and some experts. Through the analysis of a specially designed questionnaire on college graduates’ employment, this paper draws some valuable data from it and by applying analytical hierarchy process, provides a scientific and practical decision-making model for college graduates to make their career choices. A number of cases are studied to illustrate the application of this model, thus affording a manageable and rational solution to the college graduates’ employment issue

Answer 2

感觉好不顺口,全部改了,仅供参考.
Graduate employment issue has always been the focus of attention of the community, this article will analyse the current employment situation of university students in the points of views about university students, employers and other experts and in view of the employment situation in some useful perspectives and views. Through this special design and graduate employment questionnaire analysis,it gives useful data.With the use of level analysis, the career issues for university graduates with a scientific and rational decision-making models are being used.And through this case that the use of models,it will help university graduates to resolve the current problems with a simple choice, and rational solution.

Answer 3

Summary:

Since the employment of college graduates is the focal point of the society's attention, this thesis analyzed the current college graduates employment situation from a various of points of the views of college graduates, employers, and some experts. Also, the thesis provides some useful opinions and suggestions about the current employment situation. The results of the surveys that were specifically designed for the college graduates employment were analyzed and the useful data were extracted. by using multiple layer analysis, a scientific and valuable model for decision making was provided to the college graduates to choose their career. The thesis illustrated the use of the model through several real cases, providing a simple and valuable method to solve the questions and problems that occurred to the current college graduates in their career searching.

Answer 4

Graduate Employment issues has always been the focus of attention of the community, this will be from university students, employers and other experts on integrated perspective, to analyse the current employment situation of university students, and in view of the employment situation in some useful perspectives and views. Through this special design graduates employment questionnaire analysis, the extraction of useful data, the use of level analysis, career issues for university graduates with a scientific and rational decision-making models, and through this case that the use of models, university graduates in order to resolve the current problem with a simple choice, and rational solution.

Answer 5

看看我的翻译:
The university student takes up employment a problem always be the focus problem of the society concern, this text will distinguish to synthesize to elaborate from the university student and with person's unit and the angle of other experts,analysis the university student takes up employment situation currently, and puts forward some useful standpoints and viewpoint to current employment situation.Pass the analysis to this time university graduate student employment problem questionnaire form that design specially, withdraw an useful data, make use of the layer analysis method, choose the industry problem to provide a kind of science for the university graduate student,reasonable of decision model, and pass the case example explain this model of operation method, thus for current university graduate student while resolving to choose the industry problem provide a kind of simple,reasonable of resolve path.

Answer 6

Graduate Employment issues has always been the focus of attention of the community, this will be from university students, employers and other experts on integrated perspective, to analyse the current employment situation of university students, and in view of the employment situation in some useful perspectives and views. Through this special design graduates employment questionnaire analysis, the extraction of useful data, the use of level analysis, career issues for university graduates with a scientific and rational decision-making models, and through this case that the use of models, university graduates in order to resolve the current problem with a simple choice, and rational solution.