紧急！！求英文翻译

Question

这两句翻成英文怎么说呢，要地道一点啊，写personal statement 用的

在经济全球化的今天，中国面临着无法回避的一场深刻的革命

2008年底开始席卷全球的金融危机使我加深了对世界经济的了解，比如自由市场经济体系都存在经济周期，都会有发生经济危机的危险

Answer 1

1. In the present globalized economic conditions, China is facing an inescapable and completely revolution.
2. The worldwide financial crisis since the end of 2008 has deeply made me to know the structure of world economics such as a free market economy is under the economic cycle which always working with crisis.

Answer 2

In the economic globalization today, China is facing can not be evaded a profound revolution in the beginning by the end of 2008 sweeping the global financial crisis has deepened my understanding of the world economy, such as the free-market economic system in existence of economic cycles, there will be an economic crisis risk