关于一个英语作文的问题，请教哪位哥哥姐姐帮下忙哈
my favorite star是这个作文的题目，请大家帮我翻译一下关于“多才多艺”这个词用英语怎么表示，还有短句“在他只二十岁的时候”，长句“我会一如既往的支持他因为他是我最喜爱的明星”。好象没了。我再把自己的文章打出来吧。谢谢各位好心人的修改啊。
my favorite star
my favorite music star is wang leehom. i love him very much not only he is a coolman ,but also he is(多才多艺的）。（当他还只有二十岁的时候），he can play a varity of instrument such as piano violion
very well.
he is my medel(偶像）。 i like his song "our song"(我们的歌）best.it is a so great song that make me energetic.the song mixs up hip-pop、rock(多种音乐风格）.
he set a example to me that hard-working is the real key to success.(我会一如既往的支持他因为他是我最爱的 明星）。谢谢大家啦。虽然说我英语确实差，但看多少爱学习的面子上，大家就费点神赐教指导一下。
my favorite （删掉music）star is wang leehom. i love him very much ，because（添加） he is not only Versatile(添加),but also a cool man(coolman 不是个单词，要分开写).
when he was twenty years old(当他还只有二十岁的时候)
he can play a varity of instrument very well.such as piano and violin（换下位置，violin没有o，中间接and）
he is my idol.(他是我偶像)
i like his song "our song"(我们的歌）best可改为my Favorite(最喜欢的) song is "our song"
it is so great（已经都是个歌了就不需要了再说a song了） that make me vigorous（energetic是名词，不能形容）.the song is mix up with hip-pop ，rock and so on(歌不能mix，所以不能作主语，得用词组）.
he set a example for me that hard-working is the real key to success（这句很棒，用for好点）
I will always support him because he is my favorite star
我会永远支持他，因为他是我最喜欢的明星
意思都表示得很明确，多用点复合句，效果会更好
短句：When he was in his 20s.
长句：Since he is my favorite idol, I will always support him.
补充下：偶像是idol，不是medel，或者用model也可以，但是idol多一些。
音乐风格英语是genre
when he only was twenty
那个长句不会，期待高手。
还有你那个medel是什么，偶像？idol更好吧。
my favorite music star is wang leehom. i love him very much not only he is a coolman ,but also he is(多才多艺的versatile）。（当他还只有二十岁的时候 when he was right 20 years old.），he can play a varity of instrument such as piano violion
very well.
he is my medel(偶像icon）。 i like his song "our song"(我们的歌）best.it is a so great song that make me energetic.the song mixes up hip-pop、rock(多种音乐风格with different taste and style）.
he set a example to me that hard-working is the real key to success.(I will always support him as I did before for he is my favorite star我会一如既往的支持他因为他是我最爱的 明星）。
当他还只有二十岁的时候：when he was only twenty years old
我会一如既往的支持他因为他是我最喜爱的明星:I will as always support him because he is my favorite star
My favorite music star is wang leehom. I love him very much not only because he is a coolman ,but also for he is tanlented in many aspects.When he was only 20 years old, he could play a varity of instruments such as piano and violion very well.
He is my idol. I like his song so called "our song"best. It is a so great song that makes me energetic and it mixs up various music types such as hip-pop and rock .
He set an example to me that hard-working is the real key to success. I will support and love him just as in the past and eternally since he is my favourite.
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