大学英语自我介绍？急啊~

Question

大家好，
我的名字是XX，今年21岁，性别女，我喜欢唱歌和跳舞，我是一个勤奋上进，成熟稳重，大方乐观的女孩。我是XX职业技术学校的学生，我学的是XX。很高兴能在这所学校就读，与大家成为好朋友，我喜欢这里的环境，喜欢这里的老师和同学，我的家乡在XX，在这里我学到了很多知识，也让我学会了怎样与人们交往，我感觉自己成熟了许多。成为一名物流师是我的理想，我热爱我的生活。

Answer 1

My name is XX, 21-year-old, sex woman, I like singing and dancing, I was a diligent, mature, stable, optimistic and generous girl. I am a XX vocational school student, I majored in XX. Are pleased to be able to attend this school, and we become good friends, I love the environment here is like their teachers and classmates, my hometown in the XX, where I learned a lot of knowledge, let me learn how to deal with people contacts, I feel more mature now. To become a logistics specialist is my ideal, I love my life.