这几句中文翻译成英文的正确性？

Question

帮忙看看下面这几句话，中文翻译成英文和拼写是否正确。
因为是自己写的歌词，如果能提供内容上更好的修改意见，追加50分。

Tell me the truth. 告诉我真相。
Why not come to play this game with me? 为什么不与我一起玩这个游戏？
I wonder whether you love me or not? 我想知道：你是否爱我。

I miss you day and night. 我日日夜夜思念着你。
I know your love has gone. 我知道你的爱已经离我远去。
But I still remember you and wait for you. 但是我一直记得你，等待着你。

When I lost your love. 当我失去了你的爱。
I only stay at the world of darkness. 我只能呆在黑暗的世界之中。
NO LOVE NO WISH NO LIGHT 没有爱 没有希望 没有光

Everything has changed without my love for you. 一起都改变了，除了我对你的爱。
May be I have some disadvantage. 也许我有很多缺点。
May be I am not beautiful. 也许我并不美丽。
But... 但是……
Please come back. 请回来。
Please return my love! 请把属于我的爱还给我！
一起都改变了，除了我对你的爱。
这句话该怎么翻译？

再次重申……这个是中文翻译英文！！
啊！上面那句话到底怎么翻译啊！

Answer 1

以下是本人的版本，呵呵

Hide not the truth. 告诉我真相。
why did you escape from our game? 为什么不与我一起玩这个游戏？
The only question I have, is whether our love still alive? 我想知道：你是否爱我。

Miss you day and night, though it hurts. 我日日夜夜思念着你。
And I know our love has fell like autumn leaves. 我知道你的爱已经离我远去。
But I still remember you and wait. 但是我一直记得你，等待着你。

When I lost your love. 当我失去了你的爱。
I only belong to the world of darkness, 我只能呆在黑暗的世界之中。
where love, hope, light are all meaningless words. 没有爱 没有希望 没有光

Everything has changed but my love for you. 一起都改变了，除了我对你的爱
Maybe I am not perfect in the eyes of yours. 也许我有很多缺点
And beatiful may not be a description for me from the mouth of you. 也许我并不美丽。
But... 但是……
Please come back. 请回来。
Please return my love, the very love between me and you! 请把属于我的爱还给我！

个别地方为了押韵，稍稍异于普通语法。

Answer 2

Everything has changed without my love for you. 没有我对你的爱，一切都改变了。
其余很不错。

Answer 3

I only stay at the world of darkness.文艺点的话就翻成黑暗将我吞噬

Answer 4

Everything has changed without my love for you. 没有了我对你的爱，一切都已改变。

Answer 5

I'm only living in the world of darkness. 我只能呆在黑暗的世界之中。
NO LOVE NO HOPE NO LIGHT 没有爱 没有希望 没有光
Everything has changed, except for my love to you. 一起都改变了，除了我对你的爱。
Maybe I have some weaknesses. 也许我有很多缺点。