高一英语短文改错

Question

My name is Linda,I used to living in the countryside of Chicago with my parents, that was born in New York,Living in the countryside have a lot of advantages ,The air isn't polluted ,and the environment is clearly .Besides,the neighbors are friendly for each each other. However ,there are some disadvantages of living in the countryside as weii as,If you have job downtown ,you have to spend many time on the road every day,And life in the countryside isn't very excited,so most teenagers like to live downtown ,When I complete high school at 20,I moved to California to study at a university.

Answer 1

My name is Linda.
I used to live in the countryside of Chicago with my parents, who were born in New York.
Living in the countryside has a lot of advantages.
The air isn't polluted ,and the environment is clean .
Besides,the neighbors are friendly to each other.
However ,there are some disadvantages of living in the countryside as well.
If you have job downtown ,you have to spend much time on the road every day.
And life in the countryside isn't very exciting,so most teenagers like to live downtown.
When I completed high school at 20, I moved to California to study at a university.
请注意标点符号。许多应该用句号的地方用了逗号，这也是重大错误啊！

追问

这个标点也算错误吗！ - -

追答

标点不是语法错误，但是是一种写作错误，很容易导致run on sentences， 并且让人很难理解。

Answer 2

I used to living→live
in the countryside have→has
the environment is clearly→clean
are friendly for→to
as weii as→as well
spend many time on→much

追问

一共有十处错误哟~ - -