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帮忙翻译这封推荐信。翻得好的追加分。
推荐信
中国驻英国大使馆的朋友：
您好！
朱翔宇是我校高二十班的学生，也是我校老师最欣赏的学生之一。该同学学习成绩卓著，人文科学与自然科学同样精通。更为难得的是他从不妄自尊大、自以为是，刻苦地对待每一项学习任务，力争成为整个团队中的最佳。体现了他对自己和爱他的人负责的态度。
中国有句俗话：“梅花香自苦寒来”，经过他持之以恒地付出，终于考入英国华威中学学习。能在英语国家学习，是他很久以前的梦想，为此他早已经作好了准备继续完成自己的学业。
对于他的选择，我校完全尊重，并相信他会学有所成，谢谢。

此致
敬礼
江西师范大学附属中学
2010年6月21日
注意英文写作格式啊。谢谢了
不要用在线翻译软件啊。。。。

Answer 1

Dear Sir/Madam,

Hello.As one of our school's students studying in Class Ten Senior Two and appreciated by the teachers,Zhuyuxiang is always doing well in studies and he masters both the science about humanity and nature.What's more,he never has too high an opinion of himself and considers himself in the right,instead,he studies hard,making every efforts to become the best learner in the group.All these show that he is responsible for not only himself but also the ones that love him.
There is a popular saying in China,"fragrance of plum comes from hardship and cold".He was admitted to the Britain Warwick Middle School finally after his continuous paying out.For him,to be able to study in English-speaking country is his dream a long time ago,in this case,he has already well prepared to go on completing his studies.
Our school will totally respect his choice and we believe that he will succeed in his studies.Thanks.

Yours sincerely
Jiangxi Normal University Affiliated High School
June 21th,2010

供楼主参考。

Answer 2

中国驻英国大使馆的朋友：
您好！
朱翔宇是我校高二十班的学生，也是我校老师最欣赏的学生之一。该同学学习成绩卓著，人文科学与自然科学同样精通。更为难得的是他从不妄自尊大、自以为是，刻苦地对待每一项学习任务，力争成为整个团队中的最佳。体现了他对自己和爱他的人负责的态度。
中国有句俗话：“梅花香自苦寒来”，经过他持之以恒地付出，终于考入英国华威中学学习。能在英语国家学习，是他很久以前的梦想，为此他早已经作好了准备继续完成自己的学业。
对于他的选择，我校完全尊重，并相信他会学有所成，谢谢。

此致
敬礼
江西师范大学附属中学
2010年6月21日
China's ambassador to the British embassy friend:
Hello!
ZhuXiangYu is high school students of our class, but also one of the most admire teacher. The outstanding students with natural sciences, humanities as master. More importantly, he never thinks, hard self-important, treat each tasks for the entire team, strive to become the best. His love for himself and his men responsible attitude.
There is a saying: "Chinese plum no sweet without sweat", after he consistently, finally admitted Warwick middle school. To study in an english-speaking country, is long ago he dreams, so he had prepared to complete their education.
For his choice, our fully respect and believes he will be a success, thank you.

this
salute
Jiangxi normal college affiliated middle school
On June 21, by 2010

Answer 3

Chinese Embassy in UK friends:
Hello!
Zhu Xiangyu is my high school class of 20 students, but also my school teachers one of the most appreciative student. Outstanding student achievement in the humanities and natural sciences are equally proficient. More rare is that he never arrogant, opinionated, hard to treat each learning task, and strive to become the best team. Reflects his love for his own and responsible attitude.
Chinese saying: "plum blossom from the bitter cold", through his perseverance paid, finally admitted to Warwick secondary school. Learning in English-speaking countries, is his dream a long time ago, for which he already ready to finish her studies. For his choice, and I totally respect school and believes he will have learned something, thank you.
Yours sincerely, Jiangxi Normal University Affiliated High School June 21, 2010

Answer 4

recommendation
China's ambassador to the British embassy friend:
Hello!
ZhuXiangYu is high school students of our class, but also one of the most admire teacher. The outstanding students with natural sciences, humanities as master. More importantly, he never thinks, hard self-important, treat each tasks for the entire team, strive to become the best. His love for himself and his men responsible attitude.
There is a saying: "Chinese plum no sweet without sweat", after he consistently, finally admitted Warwick middle school. To study in an english-speaking country, is long ago he dreams, so he had prepared to complete their education.
For his choice, our fully respect and believes he will be a success, thank you.

this
salute
Jiangxi normal college affiliated middle school
On June 21, by 2010