写作(计20分)人人都在追求幸福生活,不同的人追求幸福生活的方式不同,你是怎样追求幸福生活的?请以My happy life 为题,写一篇英语作文,介绍一下你的幸福生活。作文必须包括以下要点:1.在家经常帮助父母和其他家庭成员,他们也很爱你。2.在学校认真学习,尊敬老师,与同学相处友好。3.平时注意不乱扔垃圾,宽容待人。4.有许多好朋友,生活得很开心,始终带着笑容面对一切。要求:1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下连贯;2)必须包括所有相关信息,并作适当发挥;3)词数:100词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);4)不使用真实姓名和校名等。My happy life Everyone wants to have a happy life. Different people have different ways to get it. ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________
My happy life Everyone wants to have a happy life. Different people have different ways to get it. I have my own way to stay happy. At home I help my parents with housework. And I also often help my grandparents. We all love each other. At school, I work hard at all the subjects. The teachers all love me. And I get on well with my classmates. I never throw litter around. I never say bad words about others. I have a lot of friends. I often talk with them about many interested things. I am always happy. I am always wearing a smile on my face all the time. |
试题分析:这是一篇给材料作文,介绍自己的幸福生活。题目中给出的材料较为齐全。动笔前应根据材料内容组织语言,列出简单提纲,确定句子的时态,关键单词等问题。在写作时,本文的主语可以用第一人称,时态一般应该用一般现在时。应该尽量包括文中提示的内容,可稍加拓展。 点评:此类作为首先要做的就是认真阅读材料,不能跑题偏题。写作中注意一些基础的写作常识,不犯低级错误。只要平时积累足够,就一定能获得满意的分数。另外为了应付考试,可以有选择的背诵一些范文,这样应考时就会有法可依。 |