写作思路:选材确立中心,选择真实可信、新鲜有趣的材料,深刻地表现出来。
If you ask to me favorite season? I to say: my favorite season is fall. Because fall is cool and windy but isn't too hot and too cold.
如果你问我最喜欢的季节吗?我说:我最喜欢的季节是秋天。因为秋天是凉爽有风但不太热、太冷。
I like reader relaxed and happy feeling. The climate is cool and pleasant in autumn, not so hot in summer nor so cold in winter. Autumn is the harvest season, golden rice in the paddy fields are ripe.
我喜欢读者轻松愉快的感觉。秋天气候凉爽宜人,夏天不太热冬天也不太冷。秋天是丰收的季节,稻田的金大米成熟。
Under the rays of the Sun in a piece of gold, Maple fell on a piece of Red Maple leaves, dancing in the air like a beautiful butterfly. moreover fall will come, farmers can harvest theirs "fruits of lador" The most exciting still can eat many tasty fruits. Such as: oranges, mangos, bananas, apples, pears……
在太阳的光线在一块金子,枫落在一片红色的枫叶,在空中跳舞像一只美丽的蝴蝶。而且会下降,农民可以收获他们的“lador水果”最令人兴奋的还是可以吃很多美味的水果。如:橙子、芒果、香蕉、苹果、梨……
Autumn is a beautiful, happy! I like autumn。
秋天是一个美丽、快乐!我喜欢秋天。
Listen to my introduce, do you know why I like fall?
听我的介绍,你知道我为什么喜欢秋天吗?