写作文时写的英文句子，然后老师说有语病，求分析一下句子！十分感谢！若有错，麻烦告知该如何改正！
I am convinced that no one have such strong will than me which wants to show How wonderful Chinese painting is to other people who do not understand Chinese painting well.
have应该改成has 然后 strong will前面加一个a更恰当
我写的一篇英语作文帮麻烦修改下,谢谢
The WC of school was very very terrible.【理论上讲，这句话是可行的，但是还是时态问题，要统一时态哦~】No water and nobody clean.【这句话就出大问题了。其一，water 是名词，nobody clean 这是N+VI 完整的主谓结构，这样的情况下是不能用并列的，就像，说：“水和我要和的水”这样的...
...英语文章,可是有太多语法错误求各位帮忙修一下!(不要全部修留一两...
in the first two days 这句话不太好理解，用通俗易懂点的好：in two days call 要用过去式called be going to do something ,to 后不加过去分词或其它形式 But boosted this car didn't come easy (这句话可能在语法上不好理解，如果你是用boosting 的话，至少知道行使这个动作的是由人发出...
写了一篇英语作文,请高手帮忙批评修改。主要修改语法错误,还有的句子可...
He is an ordinary person，but looks forword to getting success some day.He often read biographies of some outstanding people.He is lost in the ocean of knowledge.But very soon,he faced failure again and again. He sometimes went mad and asked himself “Why me always have failure...
高中英语作文,希望指出错误,并改正,字写得不好,望见谅,谢谢!
另外who are they loved ones是病句，语义不顺，应该用who they really love deep down（他们内心深处真正爱的人）会好很多。记住一点，写一个句子的时候，基本的主语+谓语+宾语的结构一定要清楚。整句话这样会好：Gradually, they are mentally (在精神上疏远了) away from their families, who they ...
英语作文写不好,昨天的一次作文,老师说我有30处错误,问题出在哪里了,是...
然后要自己多写 我们有同学连着三个月每周自己向老师交一篇作文的 老师会抽空帮她改 怎么换句式 换词 该怎么说 坚持了大概有两个多月 作文就很纯熟了 一定要自己写 还要改并记住 练口语对作文也有很大的帮助 因为作文主要考的就是表达能力 平常的阅读咱能看懂 可未必能写出这样的东西 所以写作文...
帮忙看看我写的一篇英语作文,看看有没有什么错误?
比如说多用点连接词，像什么as a result of, for example, from my perspective, as far as i am concerned, 之类的恩~顺便说一下，写作文的话，用一些从句会更能丰富你想表达的意思……单词什么的最好在多样化一点~不能说要表达污染的意思就光用pollute吧~还有contaminate、taint之类的恩~~加油...
...这篇英语作文有没有什么错误,谢谢,有错帮忙说下正确句子。感谢...
Xue Ting （to去掉） take it to you.At last , （I also say “） Happy birthday to you!（”）.Yours ,Wendy 大致改了，有的直接改，没括出来 建议，so also then but very have to没必要用那么多 不要那么多逗号，把句子连起来，说话简洁点 LZ年纪应该不大，写成这样不错了 ...
下面是我的英语作文,求大人帮我美化一下句子和语法。
The Lancaster bomber wasn’t too badly damaged when it crashed on a remote island in the south Pacific.Then in 1989,twenty-six years after the crash,the wreck remained undisturbed until it was rediscovered in an aerial survey of the island.The French authorities had the plane ...
十万火急!写英语作文时候都有什么出彩的句式呢??
I cannot entirely agree with the idea that… 我无法完全同意这一观点….Personally, I am standing on the side of … 就个人而言,我站在…的一边.I sincerely believe that… 我真诚地相信…In my opinion, it is more advisable to do … than to do….在我个人看来,做…比做…更明智....
这篇英语作文 帮我检查一下哪里有语法和句子错误呗 谢谢~
不是went to shopping去掉to去
