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Many metal oxides effectively modify metallic aluminum (Al) powders to produce hydrogen in neutral
water at room temperature. In this study, hydrogen is generated even more rapidly from the reacted
solution when the by-product Al(OH)3 (bayerite) is present. The influence of Al(OH)3 on the hydrogen
generation during the aluminum/water reaction is highly dependent on the surface area and the crystallinity of Al(OH)3. High surface area and poor crystallinity of Al(OH)3 render the system a rapid
hydrogen generation rate. The self-catalytic phenomenon can be explained by the formation of AlO(OH)
(boehmite) from the reaction of by-product b-Al(OH)3 and the surface passive oxide layer Al2O3.
Furthermore, by taking advantage of the exothermic heat from the Al/water reaction, hydrogen yield is
able to reach 70% within 30 min in a common aqueous solution (pH < 10) containing fine Al(OH)3. This
hydrogen generation technology relies on common, nontoxic, noncorrosive additives and is therefore
a very promising system for creating a use-on-demand hydrogen source.

Answer 1

许多金属氧化物有效地改变金属铝（Al）粉末的中性氢气生产
water at room temperature. In this study, hydrogen is generated even more rapidly from the reacted
在室温下，水。在这项研究中，氢是更迅速地从反应生成的
solution when the by-product Al(OH)3 (bayerite) is present. The influence of Al(OH)3 on the hydrogen
解决方案时，Al（OH）3副产物（三羟）是目前。Al（OH）3影响氢
generation during the aluminum/water reaction is highly dependent on the surface area and the crystallinity of Al(OH)3. High surface area and poor crystallinity of Al(OH)3 render the system a rapid
铝/水反应生成过程中是高度依赖于表面和Al（OH）3的结晶。高表面积和Al（OH）3的结晶度差，使系统迅速
hydrogen generation rate. The self-catalytic phenomenon can be explained by the formation of AlO(OH)
产氢速率。自催化现象可以用AlO（OH）形成的解释
(boehmite) from the reaction of by-product b-Al(OH)3 and the surface passive oxide layer Al2O3.
（勃姆石）从副产物Al（OH）3的反应和表面钝化氧化物层Al2O3。
Furthermore, by taking advantage of the exothermic heat from the Al/water reaction, hydrogen yield is
此外，利用放热的铝/水反应，氢气产量
able to reach 70% within 30 min in a common aqueous solution (pH < 10) containing fine Al(OH)3. This
能达到70%的30分钟内，在一个共同的水溶液（pH＜10）含Al（OH）3细。这
hydrogen generation technology relies on common, nontoxic, noncorrosive additives and is therefore
制氢技术依赖于共同的，无毒，耐腐蚀的添加剂，因此
a very promising system for creating a use-on-demand hydrogen source.
一个很有前途的创造需求的氢源使用系统。