英语自我介绍，翻译： 大家好，我叫ShaoYuQin。我今年12岁了，我是“鉴湖小学”的学生.我的语文老师很严格

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大家好，我叫ShaoYuQin。我今年12岁了，我是“鉴湖小学”的学生.我的语文老师很严格，但她有时又很和蔼。我喜欢英语课，因为它很有意思。我的英语老师很漂亮。我不喜欢星期三，因为星期三有两节语文课和两节数学课。我经常在7:00坐我爸爸的小汽车去上学，有时候我乘公共汽车去学校。我通常步行回家，因为那可以使我锻炼身体。
急急急！！！要快一点，我有急用，20分钟内！！！
和我写的校对一下，有没有错的地方。。。呵呵呵呵。。。。。。
名字错了，不写名字也没事

Answer 1

Hello everyone, my name is ShaoYuQin. I'm 12 years old, I am a students of Jianhu elementary school. My Chinese teacher is very strict with us, but she sometimes is very kind. I like English class, because it is very interesting. My English teacher is very beautiful. I don't like Wednesday, because we have two Chinese and two math classes . I often go to school by my dad's car at 7:00 a.m. , and sometimes I go to school by bus. I usually walk home, because it can make me healthy.

Answer 2

Hello, my name is ShaoYuQin. I'm 12 years old, I was "elementary school students of shaoxing. My Chinese teacher is very strict, but she is sometimes very kind. I like English class, because it is very interesting. My English teacher is very beautiful. I don't like Wednesday, because we have two Chinese classes and two Wednesday math. I often sit on my dad's car at 7:00 a.m. to go to school, and sometimes I go to school by bus. I usually walk home, because it can make my exercise.