以 My Exciting Experience 为题 写一篇英语作文

Question

根据提示信息 写一篇小短文1 交流英语学习经验2 参加英语晚会3 游览观光名胜

Answer 1

我的介绍经验
显然，这不是我第一次做了介绍。但是，这是我第一次有一组讨论有这么多不同的国籍。这是一个相当的挑战我。
在没有首先介绍，我们分隔我们的工作，使每个人都有不同地区的事情。我所做的目标受众。老师告诉我们要更加具体。由于我们的业务是糕点店我试图将观察谁买糕点和蛋糕在我的领域。我发现了这两个年轻人和老年人要购买，和女性更喜欢这些东西比男子。由于我们的主要产品是有机蛋糕我们决定目标工人阶级女20-40岁年龄组之间。
当我正在做的PowerPoint幻灯片，我认为缺乏证据的市场目标受众。网站说，老师说来我的脑海。搜索数据库
找到人口诺丁汉。最大年龄组的正是我们所要的目标。
在做了专题介绍，所有的人在看着我们一流的，大家都有点紧张。其他组的两名成员为第一语言是英语，他们可以没有见本流利的说明。但对我来说也许我还没有准备好，或者我还没有把许多关键点，在我的幻灯片。我要看看我注意到很多。有时，如果我看到有人在看着我当我看见他或她，我会忘记，我会说。我的一些说明，我是太详细，我要寻找的资料我忘记了。
有些人认为这个类是无用的，因为没有测试。以我的观点来看，我不公平的同意。什么老师说，可以帮助我们做了介绍。什么样的事情我遇到了。介绍，做法是一个很好的方法来解决紧张。如果您已经尽全力，但仍无法这是答案的翻译

Answer 2

My presentation experience
Obviously this is not my first time doing the presentation. But this is the first time I have a group discuss with so many different nationalities. This is quite challenge for me.
Before did the first presentation, we separated our work so that everyone has different parts to do. I am doing the target audience. The tutor tells us to be more specified. As our business is bakery shop I tried to observe who will buy the pastries and cakes in my area. I find out both young and old people like to purchase, and women are more prefer this stuff than men do. By reason of our main product is organic cake we decide to target the working class female between age group 20-40.
When I was doing the PowerPoint slides, I feel lack of evidence of market for the target audience. A website that teacher said come to my mind. I search the database
find the demographic of Nottingham. The largest age group is exactly what we are going to target.
When doing the presentation, all people in the class looking at us, everyone is a bit nervous. To the other group two members whose first language is English, they can present fluently without see the notes. But to me maybe I have not prepared very well, or I have not put many key points in my slides. I need to look at my notes very often. Sometimes if I saw someone is looking at me when I caught sight of him or her, I will forget what I am going to say. Some of my notes I made is too detailed, I need to look for the information I forgot.
Some people think this class is useless because of there is no test. To my point of view, I do not fairly agree. What the tutor said, can help us doing the presentation. Like what I met. For the presentation, practice is a good way to solve nervous. If you have tried your best but still cannot remember, write as generalize as you can