请问这句英语有语法错误吗？

Question

the lesson we can draw from this picture is clear and simple:action of senior,in my point,should be deemed strikingly import than their word

Answer 1

不能确定，因为不确定要表达什么意思，action of senior和import than their words可能有问题。

追问

大致就是表达这幅漫画传达的意思的长辈的行动比言语更重要

追答

嗯，那照理长辈的行动要加定冠词，the action of the seniors..

如果是几个人，还要复数

Answer 2

the lesson we can draw from this picture is clear and simple:action of senior,in my point,should be deemed strikingly import than their word
我们可以从这张照片中学到的教训很简单：在我看来，上级的行动比他们的话语更重要；
我没有发现有明显的语法错误。

Answer 3

唐娜杨说得没错，不知道要表达什么，且中文逻辑也不清楚

Answer 4

import应改为important重要

Answer 5

语句不通畅，能说一下汉语你想表达什么意思吗。